This is a very good poem.I enjoy reading it and I like your style.There is indeed nothing wrong with trying new things in your writing.That's what makes poetry unique :-)take care of yourself and continue to write poems like this.I've enjoyed reading them
Suspenseful and close to home, Rain of Deception 2 will leave you in Tears. Much like Part 1, this will shocking sequel will keep you on the edge of your fingertips.
Edwin