Build up my hopes,
Build up my dreams,
Then tear me apart,
Thats what it seems.
Power my voice,
my feelings,
my motions,
my soul.
Then give me back the pride you stole.
Cut me apart,
Saw at my heart,
Drowned in my thoughts so teary,
Until I grow too weary.
Push me,
Make me try to impress you,
Then crush me to bits,
that's what you do.
I think I'll long be in this rut,
It's hard to escape the pain of being cut.
I wanted so bad to be in the school play, but of course, I wasn't. I can't believe I got cut.It really sucks!
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Reviews of "CuT /\_/\_/\(<------blades)"
Reviewed by stacey
Reviewed on November 11, 2002
Kacie i thought it was about cutting yourself but when i finished i figured it out. I am sorry u got cut from the play. You are a very good actress
Reviewed by ur bf meghan
Reviewed on November 9, 2002
Kaci, ur so awesome. To think that you could put all those feelings into something like that. Most people would shrug it off, but not you, i love that about you. Now im gonna read ur other poems!
Reviewed by logan knauss (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2002
I'm w/ Hanna i thought it was acually cutting yourself! Kaci i didn't even know you additioned i'm sorry you got cut but the Lord knew that there was something better than the play for you 2 do :)
Reviewed by Sarah
Reviewed on October 29, 2002
hey kaci girl, even though I got a part in the play i know how u feel. Just think of it this way, if u were in the play, u wouldn't be able to watch and enjoy it, thats one thing i'm dissapointed about, anyway, don't let it get ya down, I THINK YOUR A GOOD ACTRESS!
Reviewed by josh
Reviewed on October 28, 2002
cool
Reviewed by Nikki Cassidee (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
i didnt know it was anything about the plaY!i thought it was actually cutting yourselF!sorry about that kaci!good poetry!i really enjoy it...i cant believe im saying this but i think your better than me! love "the one and only Hanna"
Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2002
Sad!!! I don't like mrs. grumpy play teacher anyhoo... :P
i am sorry you were cut from the play. i know you wanted it badly, but someone else got the part. DARN!! frustrating, i know!! i've been there!! :( good display of pain here, kaci! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :(
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