Waters (poem) by Huda Orfali on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 11, 2006

I concur with the consensus of opinion below completely , Huda
your depth of heart and magnitude of spirit are all embracing in this poignant and touching tribute to the Tsunami victims
Love and Harmony
Peter

Reviewed by Michael Wells (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2005

Very powerful tribute to the tsunami victims
God bless you for that one

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Depicted with the imagery that only a masterpoet knows how to impart.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 19, 2005

wow....this was real
it felt real....sad
we all send our blessings and prayers
touching

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2005

Very insightful, heart touching write.

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi

Reviewed on January 18, 2005

I am sharing your prayer. Your poem is extraordinary, very strong. I will show it to a friend who nearly perished in the tsunami waters himself. This poem is a deeply felt tribute to the victims and a visualisation of their souls' transition from one world into the other, desparate yet full of beauty. It requires a very open heart to experience as strongly as you do the impact of a suffering you have not witnessed or undergone yourself. I admire this ability.
May God be your protector!
Mahdi

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

A write of such emotion and strength! So much slips away from us...and yet, we seem to continue beyond that physical being...excellent write...Nature will have Her choice of the children to return Home...

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Outstanding write!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

The power within these verses draw the reader into the experience because you are a most effective poet, Huda. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece. Love to you. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

in this poem you brought the reader into the velocity of poetic thought ... the excellent visuals interwoven with the emotional, spiritual and psychological elements of such a devasting experience is truly enlightened ... will look forward to reading more of your work ...

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

Very nice blend of imagery and romantism ballanced against the savagery of nature. Evokative, and atmospheric without being abandoned to angst. Well done.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

I do have to say that Chris is on point and this is so well written nice to meet you. I think this should go in a book for the victims.

Reviewed by Chris Archer (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

Wonderful and very sad tribute. You're an amazing poet, Huda.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
Blessings, Chris

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

Huda,

Welcome to the 'Den' poetess ... "Waters" is an exceptionally versed and well-crafted write ... outstanding!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

powerful write, huda; god bless those who were affected most by this horrible disaster! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <