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Harvest Time...
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*In memory of Paula, Donna, and Art…The second harvest…*




I went for a walk
One grey day,
And passed a house
Full of memories,
There were shadows
In the windows,
Peering out at me,
Beneath the shaded blinds…

In the garden,
Working rich red earth,
Was an old woman,
Bent, grey and worn…
Her face lined,
With remembered pain,
As she struggled to grow beauty,
In the tough land…

But she was solid oak,
A true woman of the earth,
She was so strong,
That she never understood,
The twigs that trembled,
Under her ever widening arch…

True to her strength and nature,
She protected and shaded her fruits,
Providing nourishment from deep
Within the earth…

The first harvest brought much drama,
Grew too fast and wild,
Dropped too soon from her branches,
Spread themselves among the earth,
Wandering lost and wounded,
Until they returned to whence they came…

Her second harvest went unnoticed,
Her mind reeled with the knowledge
Of what she had birthed…
They fell unwelcome to the earth,
In her heart,
The second harvest could never equal the first,
But they were use to themselves,
No medals,
No ribbons,
No well kept hand-prints,
No pictures hanging on the wall…

Do not grieve for them,
Children survive,
At least,
Most of them do…





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 Reviews of "Harvest Time..."
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
This poem is soul-reaching, Retta. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on September 23, 2003
Thanks for sharing such an eloquent write, Reindeer, One Love.

Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Beautiful write, Reindeer; truly enjoyed!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on September 13, 2003
This speaks to me, dearest Reindeer... to the very core. I'm deeply, deeply moved.
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
superb imagery...

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Excellent!!!
Jenni

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Your poetry is such a joy to read Reindeer, no matter the topic, it is always first class!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Yes most of them do Reindeer...this was wonderful to read..touching...floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Very deep touching write Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Beautiful write Retta! Enjoyed this tremendously. Yes we did survive, and like you said, most children do. Lisa

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Truly outstanding.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
A masterpiece!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Reindeer,
Awesome tribute..
"The first harvest brought much drama,
Grew too fast and wild,
Dropped too soon from her branches,
Spread themselves among the earth,
Wandering lost and wounded,
Until they returned to whence they came… "
{smiles}
PJ


Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Reindeer,

Your expression and style in this one is superb!
In these last lines:
"Do not grieve for them,
Children survive,
At least,
Most of them do… "
Perhaps if you replace the comma after "children survive" with a period? It changes the tone and meter, and the message might read even better?)

Outstanding job!
Tami

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Very deep write, Retta, contrasting first and second born this way. Sad, but so eloquent.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Great write that touched me deeply.

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
full of grace and beauty

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
It's all in the seeds...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
You and I did,


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