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SOME SHOTS
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A perfect shot. A handsome man and A beautiful woman. Naked but covered each other. Mouths are stuck. Bodies are moving. A perfect shot of lovemaking. Taken by me. I know both of them� A wedding shot. The bride and the groom. Warm smile and thirst- On their faces. I, the groom. She, my wife. An old shot Two men. Faces turned to camera. Hands are on other�s shoulder. Two bosom friends. He, my intimate friend. Last shot. Two ugly faces. Naked bodies. Blood everywhere� The bullet hit his head from back And dug his head, Then her face too� My wife and my friend. Taken by me. The last shot of them. Mine too�

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Reviews of "SOME SHOTS"

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 25, 2008

Very impressive... "SOME SHOTS" strikes inner emotions and takes the reader through an impressionistic voyage on wings of imagination. A magnificent composition.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

You have the makings of a great poem here. Edit a bit as Carrie suggested. Well done style and message.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

OMG! I am flabbergasted! I love the style of this piece, the way it sucks you in before poking your eyes out. Geez, *some shots* cleverly crafted, leaves you with your mouth hanging open. Very well done.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Wham...ta-ta-ma-change...bullseye!!

Final shot says it all!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Oh boy and this one does grab you right at the end.

Reviewed by Carrie Deveney

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Wow. That was great. Very original and thought provoking. I think maybe it could use a little editing just to make it flow a little better...But overall, a great poetic work.

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