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Me First and After You
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"What is sin?"


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"Me First" and "After You"

The question of sin has vexed humankind
For every day of our thousands of years
So much that some have now left it behind
Yet sin remains real still causes real tears
What is sin? It is nothing more nor less
Than pride and ordinary selfishness
As briefest expressed best and worst: "Me First"

We wonder why some people need to be
Better than we are although they are not

But then we remember that vanity
Which is the pride and selfishness of sin
And having remembered what they forgot
We can understand their hearts and begin
To purify our own left here alone
With all of the rest of humanity
Who say "After You" in community

+Steven Curtis Lance



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Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on October 21, 2005
'We can understand their hearts and begin
To purify our own left here alone
With all of the rest of humanity
Who say "After You" in community' ... this is a wonderful poem and message Dear Steven! 'After You' is our progression from 'Me First' ... when the wider world is embraced and the pride and selfishness of our little egos pales and diminishes in comparison to our Real Selves ... which includes you, me, and we!! The world is Us! May 'After You' grow and grow!!
Love Suzie :-)

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
This is an excellent poem, plus the message is profound. If only people acted by taking into account the impact of their actions on those around them the world would be a much happy place to live. Unfortunately, that is not the case. And so people who are conscious of those around them must also take into account who might be trying to abuse them. It makes it much harder for the good guy to survive in a stressfree environment. Oops, I just slipped into the last poem I read of yours. But when you think about it, they relate to each other.

~ Sara

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
Something to ponder!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 8, 2005
Interesting thoughts that may take some time to consider and think on.

Felix

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2005
impressive!!


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