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Without Stars In My Eyes
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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“Without Stars In My Eyes”

Without the sun
The world would be so dark
Without stars in my eyes
My smile become stark
Without self embrace
I have no grace
I become a no class disgrace
Without fire
No desire
Out of place
Where love shines
There will be no darkness
To hang on to a love long gone
And without stars in my eyes
What is the use?
Try and carry on?
No ways…
You overplayed your hand
Evil was best understood
The day I met you
When fools and all the parasites
Abused their vows
And trusted their friends
That was your biggest mistake
They had to run to me…
And gossip became the order of my day
Now I have to say goodbye
You thought you would give me a thrill
But all you did was breaking my will
I wanted your friendship not your skill
You wanted censorship
Not a relationship
Now I will just say
Goodbye my friend
Hope you can cope
With another
Brutal attack


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 Reviews of "Without Stars In My Eyes"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on September 4, 2004
strong emotions here

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2004
The end of a friendship?
If so, sad story.

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on August 16, 2004
Full of that raw, sad emotion here, Tinka, I can relate totally with these words...hope your heart and soul mends soon, you deserve that...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 16, 2004
This is sad yet you will embrace
yourself and find you don't need
that negative stuff. :)
Emotional piece!

Reviewed on August 16, 2004
Good morning Tinka. Definitely a fantastic write. Emotionally packed and excellent. Trish.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 16, 2004
wow, this is really emotionally charged!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Well written.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Very exceptionally said~*

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
well done

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Hummmm! Interesting poem and art though both seem a tad dark. Hope all is well :)!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Great poem Tinka. I hope you are okay? ~ Sara

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Another great write Tinka! Your poetry is
top-drawer lately, and I hope at least that
makes you happy.;-)

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
So many great lines. I think my favorite are,

"When fools and all the parasites
Abused their vows."

Nice write.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Dear Tinks,

Take care and look after yourself dear friend.
Know that you are loved and my thoughts are with you.

warm hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed on August 15, 2004
(((tinka)))

stunning poem! powerful, emotional--BRAVA! hope all is well,

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Oh so you've been to the dentist too, said one Rhino to the other. Shut your big mouth, said the other in reply. Oh the poem is right on.He He

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Well stated poem, Tinka...hope all is well ~Z~

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Absolutely stunning poetry, Tinka! Just a fantastic composition! Take care and be well, my friend.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
I haven't a clue, but I hope it all works out for the best
emotions nicely expressed

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
With a heart of gold that you have dear friend, you have no need for stars in your eyes, but those hippo's could be used to rid yourself of certain gossip mongering parasites, just throw them in and let the hippo's do they're thing...Happy I will be when you feel better and get away from all these problems, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
You handled it well.

Tinkypinkysuffersnomorevomitepukeverywelldonehopeyoufeelbetter..

Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Tinka -

'Hippo, hippo, hurray'! Excellent and quite an enjoyable write!


Robert

Reviewed on August 15, 2004
People who gossip about others have no life of their own. Tell them to get a life.

I'm sorry you have to go through this. Hope you'll be strong for yourself. We are all here for you. Drop me a line whenever you need to talk, or simply to vent.

The best is to ignore all gossips and lead your own life the best that suits you. Hey, you've only got one life to live. Live it the best way you know how. The first and foremost is to please yourself first.

((((( Love and Hugs to you )))))

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Another extremely powerful write, Tinka, straight from your heart and soul.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Straight talk is always best.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Straight , stark and right to the point Tinka...
It is always best to stand four square against those who oppose you , or breach your confidence...

Excellent write
Peter


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