Pure of soul
Deep of heart
Among the known
But wander in darkness
Doubting footsteps
For what tomorrow might bring
Wandering down the valley of hope
Down rocky mountain
Where bright sunbeam fall
Pure of soul
Deep of heart
Among the known
But still wander in the dark
Steps limp now
Caring the burden of life
Curved swords and spears of hate
Wounded… bruised heart
Lost the road of trust
But pure of soul
Deep of heart
Among the known
Nature never let her down
Make her act like a clown
With tears and a frown
Peering eyes
Leaving no trace
Of life!!
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Reviewed by Reverend Davey (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Very sad feelings indeed. Please keep your head up and march around, believing that positive things are going to touch your life and something wonderful is just around the corner! No point in feeling down, it will just gather negativity, making a cloud hide your own essence of light. Allow the Light of the Lord to be able to shine on you Tinka, my girl. For soon in the very near future your life will take on a new meaning and happiness will abound!
Believe the old Rev huh? I am praying for you too.
Blessings dear lady, Rev Davey
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
touching wonderful poem......And what a gorgeous family........ty, Dani
What a beautiful picture above your poem.
This poem is very deep and I feel much sorrow and pain in it.
I have always known Tinka from reading your work that you have a very deep empathy with bruised hearts and sometimes your poetry tugs me into sitting up straight and becoming very alert,it wakes me up.
That's power
and
your poems have it.
Tinka your loving care for family shows in this poem and photo!
I hope and pray you will find the happiness you deserve!
Keep the faith and stay strong!
Tink? You can come here, as family... We'll give you a taste of just-living-'cause-we're-alive taste, with no pressures, and some of Jerry's mom's cinnamon bread, I have a loaf in the freezer with your name on it...
Such diverse faces, diverse beliefs glowing out of your picuture's face... We cannot hope all grow at the same time, have to learn to love without what we want in return, but, you do have it, Tinka. You have many friends who love you and your soul. :)
Lovely expression Tinka but also so filled with sadness and despondency. A loving hug for you friend ((((((((((Tinka))))))))))
Take heart you bless others with your words
Chanti
Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Bravo my friend. You have caprtured in verse the life we love with those we love. My sincere compliments.
Beautiful prose and a beautiful family with their mother's smile. Thanks for sharing both with us .
Susan
Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Tinka! This is so beautifully written. The emotion, the pathos.....no doubt you have a been a great source of comfort to many people. Hope you continue to draw strength from your poetry.
Very moving piece Tinka...resonant with emotion and sentiment .
Love
Peter
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Tinka, an exceptionally well-penned heartfelt composition my friend. Life is always full of unknowns, yet, it is in ones nature to search out to achieve and find tranquility and harmony. An excellent piece of poetry, and the wonderful picture of you and your family, helps compliment this piece quite well. Take care.
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Believe the old Rev huh? I am praying for you too.
Blessings dear lady, Rev Davey
Joy and happiness
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This poem is very deep and I feel much sorrow and pain in it.
I have always known Tinka from reading your work that you have a very deep empathy with bruised hearts and sometimes your poetry tugs me into sitting up straight and becoming very alert,it wakes me up.
That's power
and
your poems have it.
I hope and pray you will find the happiness you deserve!
Keep the faith and stay strong!
Such diverse faces, diverse beliefs glowing out of your picuture's face... We cannot hope all grow at the same time, have to learn to love without what we want in return, but, you do have it, Tinka. You have many friends who love you and your soul. :)
You are a poetess par excellent - an emotionally charged and very-well delivered poetic masterpiece!
Robert
It's the valley that we all need to keep treading, Tinka; well said.
A marvelous family photo, by the way.
Take heart you bless others with your words
Chanti
CHuckie
Susan
Love
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Is that your children? You are gifted to have such a beautiful family.
This one is crying out!!
Dear friend take heart, you
now that you are loved. Do
you need to chat ? let me know !
Warm hugs
Elga
this piece had a very interesting style and i enjoyed it because i felt it was left open to interpretation. Nice work.
Is this your family? Beautiful pic!
Ann