Before Her Blinded Eyes (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Before Her Blinded Eyes
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Music "Have I told you Lately that I love you"

Before Her Blinded Eyes Into the night she stands Nothing more preposterous Than running judge-mend Upon poetry filled with love It is an talent to have� brain entranced And filled with ecstasy Beauty I know is good But wit is more� Because they lack the �sacred� pen Into the shadow of the night she stands Grateful soul in spite of all The subject of her power To sail this ship alone So loud her laughter in the dark And tear blinded eyes can still see The loneliest ship That ever sailed the sea Her laughter even louder now Until her side starts to burn Before her blinded eyes she see The image of you A wave of tears breaks loose And run upon her cheek so bruised Washes away the fear of dark As she touch Your faceless face with love And whisper gently I love You Copyright �2004 Tinka Boukes All rights reserved; and may not be reproduced in any way without permission from the author

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Tinka,

Deep, very deep - from the heart ... powerfully emotional write ... genuine feelings; excellent my friend!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on September 16, 2004

This is so beautiful and sad at the same time. Truly enjoyed this write.
*hugs* Danielle

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on September 6, 2004

Heartfelt write.
Matching my mood tonight.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

This is lovely, Tinka. Thank you.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Another well penned thought. truly deep

Reviewed by William Bonilla

A lovely write ...Tinka
well penned
enjoyed it much
was that the "Ship Of Fools"....?

William .....peace & love

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on September 3, 2004

To sail this ship alone...
Wow. This was so deeply stirring, Tinka. Loved your "touch your faceless face with love"... just beautiful. Sail on, seer-poet! Dawn

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Dear Tinks,

A sad yet loving write. You did it again my friend your wonderful way with words, you are one very talented lady :) Keep smiling :):)

warm hugs and love precious friend
Elga

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Very Insightful write!

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Thank you

SueB

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Very loving and hopeful narrative...with single minded determination , Tinka...
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Great expression. Excellent write.

Reviewed by George Carroll

A deep and loving poem full of the emotion that only you can express.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

(((tinka)))

complex emotions, powerful write! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

lovely, with mixed emotions

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Beautiful work, Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Into the shadow of the night she stands
Grateful soul in spite of all

A sad poem, Tinka, powerfully penned, yet with a tinge of hope for a brighter tomorrow.

Keep Standing Tall, and keep writing these extremely heartfelt writes.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

oh, tinks, this is just lovely! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :D

but you spelled blind wrong; there's no e at the end! sorry for my being critical, but thought you would like to know....