Powerful emotions, Tinka, Hope you're OK

Just think of all those hot young sailors needing mouth to mouth resusitation, oh my you will be in your glory...LOL! Ed

Tinka,

An astonishing and uniquely penned write - another poetic masterpiece, my friend!

Robert

I agree with Eileen,
and hope all is well.......

This is haunting and painful. You keep
the hope alive and there's a sunny day
and blue seas ahead.

Tinka, an extremely well-penned heartfelt timeless composition, my gifted friend. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.

Tinka - Great poem about betrayal. Stay strong Tinka, stay strong. ~ Sara

Hopefully, the right 'ship' will still appear on the horizon, Tinka. Never abandon your 'Sanctuary of Hope.'

I agree with Eileen, Tinka! Heartfelt and compelling, dear Poet!

Ouch, this is super painful.

But there are other ships in the sea.
I hope one is your dream boat.

Very sad and pensive write , Tinka
Love
Peter

though your heart has been disappointed your soul is anointed and searching a sea of hope ...

powerful poem, Tinka!

i thought this was a strong write Tinka, and hit way below the surface, ty al

Cynth'ya Reed has said it all and her conclusion is one I agree with

The one great thing about life is, there's always a tomorrow. Sad write to be sure.

Tinka, there is one advantage to life sucking once in awhile. It's because of bad times that we learn to appreciate the good times all the more. A friend once told me "Where there's life, there's hope." I can't tell you how many times I've recalled that phrase over the years. Love, Michelle

Yep_BELIEVE IT_LIFE SUCKS_

Whole World Is Ship Of Lies From El Presidente bush To Your 2 Faced Next Door Neighbors_

Great WRITE TOO IT!

TRASK

Dear Tinka,

Although so full of hurt and sadness, you must never give up, always look to the bright side :) Great write :)

warm hugs
Elga

Something to suggest: Emotions and observations seem to be one vs. the other, gets in the way of the purity of a message I see here, and that message, unless I'm mistaken is this: that hurts continue to roll as long as time and life coexist, and at times it seems as if the wear and tear of trials is enough to cause one to shipwreck, to be lost at sea. One craves the safety of the shoreline, the beacon of the lighthouse. And as long as we can feel, we can change our situation. Like a storm, sometimes we can't see our way. . . that's why we have a guiding light that I call "God."

Here are the strongest points of this poem, line by line:


Down by the seaside alone

I saw a “ship” cast up by the roaring sea

I kneeled down on this place called my own

Known to me… my “sanctuary of hope”

I cried my heart out

I kneeled down on this place called my own

Known to me… my “sanctuary of hope”

I cried my heart out

Another day… another disappointment… another lie

Nothing

The “ship” now gone.

Keep writing Tinka, you have a gift to overcome adversity, only you just don't realize it yet. It's all over your poetry. Share it with others who are going through tough times, and you will find the magic of healing surround your situation.

blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

(((tinka)))

*ouch* felt this one--hope things improve for you sooooooon

(((HUGS))) and more (((HUGS))) and prayer, love, karla.

Tinka, no one does black and blue, like you!
This is stunning poetry!

crying an ocean! send that ship to a watery grave

sueb

Your ability to express pain is a service to those who read your work. Thank you.

beautiful and heartwrenching write, tinka! write away; it will do you good!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(

you are in my prayers, each and every day!

love that little chance you give yourself to just say "enough" at the end! deep feeling throughout this one. Dawn

Tinka,
Oceans are filled with tears of sadness. You've got a sad but beautiful poem here.

Tinka you know how to pull the heartstrings, a beautiful and emotive write.