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Last Spin Of The Sun
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Music”Before the next teardrop falls”

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"Last Spin Of The Sun"


 


With the last spin of the sun


And flames within every grain


Black silence mourn…


Crying in vain


Everybody’s world now dying


Hell breaks lose


Roaring


Ocean crying


And with the wind in my hair


The east wind chills my body


Hell winds and sea collides once again


As both quench their thirst


The night is near


And no sailors are welcome here


Rough sea not so gentle at heart


As howling wind rips you apart


Winding wind sing by the rocks


As crying clouds was breaking


Down come the rain


At the last spin of the sun


Everybody’s world now


 Drowning


 


 


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 Reviews of "Last Spin Of The Sun"
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Reviewed on January 18, 2005
Tinka,

Marvelous write my friend - the expressions are addressed to perfection ... superb!!

Best to you,

Robert
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
well done
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Well expressed, Tinka! I also liked your title, "Last Spin Of The Sun" It's very original.
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Powerful and moving piece Tinka! Brava!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Such sadness in this poem, excellently expressed Tinka,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
glad your fine, wonderfully expressed verse...~Z~
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
wonderful use of such vivid imagery. -- Jeff
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
sometimes we just have to drown within ourselves to be revivied again ...

great write ...
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
I've never been in a storm like that -- escaped a tornado -- just barely, been in plenty of earthquakes, but never a hurricane. Nature has its way, we must respect its power. I'm glad you're okay.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Beautiful but sad write, Tinka. Take heart, things always end up better than we expect :) *BIG HUGS*
much love Danielle
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
A beautiful way of words Tinka.
Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Well done. Sad, but quite an image. As I read this, I wondered if many of the hurricane victims felt this way.

Bob H
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Agree with Amira below...a real weepie , Tinka
Time to start smiling and believing again in yourself...
Love
Peter
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Gotta agree with Jerry on this one, Tinka girl...
it IS awesome...and the title booms a powerful message
all on its own!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Damn, sweet thing, you put your thinking cap on for this one, hon. This poem is awesome and I hate that words but IT FITS! I don't know what moved you to pen this dramatic poem, but you did good.
Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Great write Tinka...love the graphic too!!
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Dear Tinka,

Great poetry as always Tinka, so beautifully written.

warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Wonderful poetress you are.....
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Such a beautiful photo - yet such sad lines.
All the best to you.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Tinka, your talent at poetry just gets better and better with each new poem. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
The ocean and sky can be your friend or your worst nightmare come true. I could hear the howling winds in this one!
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
very graphic dear!

sueb
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Incredible poem Tinka! You really captured the moment
with this one. Such a sad state of affairs the world is in!
Wonderful work!
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
well... certainly a bit of a downward spiral feel. your original phrasing and vivid descriptions are so excellent here. i FELT that last spin of the sun (awesome image) and life drowning. It's what a poem should do.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
(((o, tinka)))

this one rips the heart right out--painful to read *tears* but an excellent, visual write--well done!

(((HUGS))) and hope you're okay, love, karla. :(
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