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Mindless Games
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Music "South African"

Happy Thanksgiving too all who care enough show it! *~~~~~~* Mindless Games" Bring out your words Let's have a battle today Or do you fear the results I may win this battle without the fame On this Thanksgiving Day You know and I know this very well I may regret this word game today That I never should have brought this up I am angry and going to spill it all out The reasons why I don't love you anymore And why I do love someone like crazy Why do you bring me your words When all you really want is my body On this Thanksgiving Day Some kind of reward for you not loving me Just whenever you wish you take me Knowing how I truly feel about this I only wish to know why This is your glory in fame Am I the one to be blamed? For your pride without any shame When�in hells name did I enter this mindless game? But obviously for some stupid reason I will not know for sure On this Thanksgiving Day Thanks for what? When this mindless game end I will be thankful Copyright �2004 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 10, 2004

Tinka,

Your depth to which you write poetry is bottomless - the imagery, the rhyme, the tempo, are all penned as if magic has been performed time and time again - your are a poetess par supreme!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

I second that!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 27, 2004

Time to draw a line under the whole business Tinka....and start afresh...
Peter

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Crazy people follow you forever.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Tinka, sometimes one needs to walk away from �mindless games!� It seems as though you have been able to realize that without true love, it is a �mindless game!� An excellent, well-penned composition, Poetess. I wish you the best as you continue marching towards the �promised land,� my friend. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on November 25, 2004

You know..I tried to get into a "Battle of Words" with my ex, but it just wasn't any fun because he didn't have the proper equipment :) Relax, sweetie, everything works out...God, I hate hearing that when people say it to me, but it's true. Emotional write, enjoyed reading very much (keep smiling..it'll be okay)

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Hope all is well with you, Tinka..Have missed you guys a lot...but I have been really busy...
Hugs
Jenni

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

I wish I had a brain much less a mind..less some thoughts...
Things have a way of working out Tinka....
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Reviewed by jude forese

your words are so strong, do you think it ever can?

well expressed emotions ...

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Ah, the endless game of give, you take. Nicely captured here.

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

okay...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

I Wrote My Lastest Battle Poem Read It In Lieu Of Mindless $$$$ Games!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reminds me of my ex nephew-in-law. But I hope that my neice will find the peace she needs to end the mindless games.

Reviewed by George Carroll

May the Good Lord bring peace soon to your troubled heart..

Love and Hugs
George

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Oh the games people play! You would think that with all the words at our command we would learn to use them in a better way;-) I hope you can give thanks soon, for the good things you deserve! Peace and love to you Tinka!