Please Just Leave Me Alone (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Please lay down your sword now

From my point of view it seems

You’ve scattered your foe

Go now there is much to put right

This place does not feel pleasant

Please just leave me alone

Focus on facts… not fiction

Don’t rush into battle with fate

And fire with your pen of hate

Intruder of my Den

Just leave me alone

Hell is the hate flickering in your eye

Creating havoc

And crippled my mind!!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 27, 2004

You tell 'em Tink..Lemme at 'em..grrr..I don't like my friends picked on...
...just know that I love your poems OK..

Vesna :)

{{hugs}}

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 27, 2004

Time to develope thick skin Tinka...
These low life are just cowards who prey on unsuspecting people...
Delete them if you can...
Peter

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Hi Tinka, Thank you so much for the warm welcome and message. I have missed you all terribly but just couldn't be here. Lots have happend in the past year and not all was good. My little sister lost her baby and that was a great blow to us. It left me devastated...but life goes on...

I can't wait for school to close here in 2 wks time. Let those kids go give their parents some trouble for a change..lol..

Anyway, I want to read and comment on a few ppl's poems here tonight so I will make this short. I hope whoever upset you goes away..
Hugs and luv
Jenni

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

delete from your page, delete from your mind, don't let it get anywhere near your heart

Reviewed by Linda Roman

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

don't let anyone get the best out of you...You are too good of a writer...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

intruders can only cripple your mind if you allow them to ... simply stand up and walk away ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

I'll Leave You Alone For Now!

TRASK

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

I don't think that few people understand that some folks get off on nasty email. I changed my server because things were getting through that should not have. Maybe sometimes a change is in order.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Your poems have begun to get even more personal than before, and that is saying a lot. I don't really care to read the daily take on your love life so I'll take you off my list. I have enjoy so much of your stuff, but lately it is just too much and is none of my business and I don't want to hear it.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Tinka, it’s unfortunate some people cannot take NO for an answer. The best thing to do, is as many others have stated, including you, my friend, is just delete them if they’re doing it on your poetry board. If not there, try contacting your local law enforcement authorities or your IP server, and you can have their IP address blocked from ever reaching yours. Welcome to the new millennium, and its marvelous technological wonders. Be safe and well.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Those who harass others are simply insecure in themselves. -- Jeff

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Great job, Tinka. I wonder why it is that some people just try to pick away at others. It is a cowards way of doing business. Whom ever it is who is doing this to you, they get their thrill when/if they run you off. Don't give in. If you didn't have talent, he/she wouldn't be bothering with you.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Don't know why some people like to inflict their poison on good people like yourself. Stay strong, this shall also pass, sayeth the Lord.

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle

Reviewed on November 26, 2004

Tinka,

Excellent composition! ...very powerful write. (Great picture!) I hope your message gets through and you find peace! The sun will rise with the new dawn! Keep your chin up! Blessings to you!

Cynthia