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“Waiting” Sleeping at midnight Within golden dreams of delight Silent night Silent meadow Tranquility But a dark cloud waiting Storm approaching Far apart weeping stars Dim almost faded…waiting Flash of lightning burning bright Eyes open wide waiting Anticipation Seeking sweet golden dream Journey done…awake Dream gone…flash of lightning From a distance Roaring thunder Arms in self-embrace…waiting Curtains slowly moving Whispering winds…lightning…thunder Much closer now Mighty flash…. Thunder of might Dark clouds pouring down Power of God He who cares Feed the soil I close my eyes…waiting Sweet sleep returns Another golden dream of delight within Awaked by rays of sun Waiting Copyright ©2004 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on December 1, 2004

really good work here, Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Your poems, have for a long time taken on a new dimension. Must be the visit to these shores..

Brilliant write Tinks..

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Tinka,

Eloquence par excellent - the verse flows beautifully here ... resounding write!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Tinka this is so very beautiful and inspiring.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

A splendid write, may your rays of sunlight shine bright.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 30, 2004

A delightful write

Carole

Reviewed by jude forese

sometimes the wait makes it all worth while ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Wonderful poetry.

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

I thought this was really delightful Tink, it was very nice Al

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Quite a night ride, Tinka. I like the depth of this one. Excellent!
Love ya!
Leland

Reviewed by George Jackson

Awesome seems the only word I can come up with, and it falls short, I'm afraid. I liked this very much.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Wonderful range of emotions in this one Tinka! Glad it ended in the sun;-)!

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

I see your beginning to feel the thunder you can deliver within your lines. Well done Tinka

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Sunlight in the aftermath--lovely! (We had thander snow the other night---7 1/2 inches of white fluff.)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

this is outstanding poetry, tinka; definitely one of your very best! awesome write; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Another golden dream of delight within

Keep having those kind, Tinky!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

This is your best work yet in my humble opinion. Excellent. Michelle

But a dark cloud waiting