There is a thin line Between life and death Between good and bad Between love and hate The beginning or the end The thin line between life and death Is only a breath away Only a heartbeat away The blink of an eye away A moment of calculation away But that thin line could be mile's apart That thin line ..a phone call away…rescue 911 One right move could make the difference Between life and death Right or wrong One wrong move could mean the end The end of a precious moment The end of a precious life The end of a precious future Or that could mean the end The end of time a joyful journey The end of the will to live on The end of heartache and pain The end of a wonderful love to gain The right move could mean endless happiness The right move could mean trust and faith The right move could be the thin line Between life and internal death It could mean a bright new beginning The right move could mean a wonderful smile All of this is called between right or wrong The thin line between life and death The wrong move can't make things right The right move will make the difference Between life and death Between right or wrong To hold on to or let go Of that thin line between Here and there a yes or no (this is a wake - up call to all)
Outstanding write. Very profound description of "A Thin Line." We make decisions in life and when we make the right move, it can lead to endless happiness. Thanks for sharing this wise message.
There's a fine line between a good and great. Your on the great side with this pen
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
Tinka, there is always that thin line, which often separates many factors. You did a wonderful job expressing it. Thanks for sharing. Take care and be well.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
A wake up call we deal with from inside everyday that we have to make decisions that affect us or others. Powerful message.
A marvelous message weaved into this masterfully crafted and perceived write ... superb work!!
Best wishes,
Robert
Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
You are right about those thin lines. Sometimes we blur those lines to fit our needs and wants. Sometimes we ignore or realize too late that we are not the Almighty Creator of any line. Let us hope we choose life and it's essence and not cross over those thin lines. Thanks for sharing this much needed write.
The opposite of love is not hate, it is indifference, but there is certainly a thin line between every aspect of life, the positive and the negative. I believe we should always try to be conscious of our words, that they not only reflect our personal feelings, but that they, also, are not intentionally hurtful to others. I see a whole lot of "it is my right to say what I think lately" and not a whole lot of kindness being extended or the old "bite my tongue to maintain a peaceful environment" type of thinking. Each coin has two sides, it is true and you explain this so well in this most focused offering, Tinka. Well constructed write.
Take care,
Sherry
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Outstanding write. Very profound description of "A Thin Line." We make decisions in life and when we make the right move, it can lead to endless happiness. Thanks for sharing this wise message.
Cynthia
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A marvelous message weaved into this masterfully crafted and perceived write ... superb work!!
Best wishes,
Robert
Take care
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(
Take care,
Sherry
A most powerful piece.