Today I feel so useless My hair hangs down My face in a frown My mood is bad My heart is sad I am a little mad But still very glad I have my writing It is so exiting But Oh!!! Boy the grammar Gee-whiz that's a hammer It hit's the tongue bad some days But don't be sad As long as I Can understand To me my poetry is grand Sometimes I speak English deliciously And you can follow me I am right behind you Yea well no fine Try me some other time When I don't feel so useless Abuser of grammar Shut up!!! Before I hit you With a hammer To fix your grammar Ask no questions And you hear no lies And I am eating pies No more B.B.Q"S Am I a grammar fool?
Oh, please. Let he who is without sin cast he first stone. LOL Honors English here who makes mistakes regularly. And you know I visit you often, gurl. ;-)
Tinka, Never worry about grammar, especially where poetry is concerned. Grammar rules (all rules can be bent or broken)stay the same but grammar is mobile, it changes as the language changes English for example has changed immensely since the Middle Ages ie it has lost it's inflexions.
Poetry is about emotion, feelings and what is in your heart, not grammar...sod the purists, I teach English and my grammar varies depends on my mood oddly enough. Your poetry conveys emotion and feeling, which is real and tangible. Grammar is merely a tool there is nothing original about it, whereas your poetry is full of originality and life.
Runny
Take care grammar girl
I used to have a 'grammer' and a 'grammpa' ... a very entertaining and superbly crafted write my friend!!
Best wishes,
Robert
Take care,
Sherry
TRASK
Poetry is about emotion, feelings and what is in your heart, not grammar...sod the purists, I teach English and my grammar varies depends on my mood oddly enough. Your poetry conveys emotion and feeling, which is real and tangible. Grammar is merely a tool there is nothing original about it, whereas your poetry is full of originality and life.
All the very best and keep up the good work
Paul.
you and i on the same wave length. write because you love to, because you have to. :) i love writing fools. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
and i love this write--so there!
Love ya!
Leland
no fool
love your style, it makes me smile
I figured you were dutch or something, and english was not your first language...and if things were a bit off......
personally????
I FOUND IT CHARMING!!!
don't let anyone tell you different!!!
go for it!!
pax Anita
original poems coming, and put a smile over that frown! NOW!;-)
Love, Eileen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(