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Sunset Fantasy
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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“Sunset Fantasy”

 

You said
You often fantasize
About riding off
Into the sunset
But I don't
I know
Because I've seen the stars
Instead I chase sunsets
Across the miles
While shaking my way
On wings of retreat
You said
You often fantasize
About riding off
Into the sunset
But I don't
My fantasies are enveloped
In wee circles of time
Carefully carved from a lesser whole
You polish’ them
Into gleaming amulet
That I hang around my neck
On a chain of desire
You said
You often fantasize
About riding off
Into the sunset
But I don't
I say happily ever after
Only ends children' fairy tales
And your content to be
The vessel at the end
Of the rainbow
From which I can borrow
At high rates of interest
You said
You wind up disappointed
When the sunset becomes
The dawn of reality

But I'm not
I always figured
If I reached the sunset
I'd get burned
You said
You often fantasize
About riding off
Into the sunset
But I didn't


 

Copyright © 2003 Tinka Boukes
 


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 Reviews of "Sunset Fantasy"
Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on January 16, 2005
Well done, Tinka. Loved this.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
sunsets are beautiful to look at
Not to ride into them
Too many obstacles, along the way
love your poem

William ......Peace & Love

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Tinka, absolutely beautiful...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Remarkable write!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Tinka, this is absolutely gorgeous

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Your poetry is like ACE says, getting better, like your bloody cricket team...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
your poetry is exceptional!

getting better and better to the point of perfecting emotional expression, embellished with some grand imagery ...

Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Tinka,

Great picture ... lovely prayer my friend - another 'Tinka special' to go down in poetic literary history as a masterpiece ... beautiful!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
You may not be riding off into the sunset, but your poems are Riding High these days, Tinky! Ride On!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Oh what the hell, ride off with them...whats the worse that can happen, a little 3rd degree burn...;) ED

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
This is so your writing, love it!
Thanks for the prayer..
Love
Ron

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
"You wind up disappointed, when the sunset becomes the dawn of reality." Powerful. With MLK day Monday, we need to live in reality, but never forget your dreams.

Reviewed on January 15, 2005
wow, tinks: you sure do know your stuff about love and all its quirks! beautiful, heartfelt write; thanks for sharing! well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

i am a savin' this one! too pretty not to read again!! :)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Tinka you do shine and it is bright and I am so glad for your light.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Got it going your was with this one.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Tinka exceptional! Superb, the way you did this one!

Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Lovely Tinka, a top write.

Paul:-}

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Fantastic poetry! Loved the music and the way the poem was captured.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Exquisite Tinky

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Beautiful poetry, Tinka!
Take care,
Sherry


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