Everlasting Sun (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Everlasting Sun
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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*�Everlasting Sun�* *When spiders tickles my brain* *Trying to crush me till I cry* *My thoughts go back to you* *Stormy and unruly like the ocean* *And deep in the forest of my mind* *Love�s last dying thoughts remain* *For loneliness is heartache within* Also tranquility without *When beasts take it away* *Or ruin a perfect day* *Specially those* *With countless powers* *And when those spiders* *Tickles my brain more* *Trying to crush my heart* *Dirt quickly fills the holes* *Stormy and Unruly* *Like the ocean* *Washing debris upon my soul* *My heart yearning for peace* *Within my sadness* *I then climb up* *To the gray clouds above* *There�* *Where my soul can live* *In understanding* *Searching* *The everlasting* *Sun so bright* Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Outstanding Tinks...

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 22, 2005

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Very deep writing, and deep people are somehow close to nature.
It fits beautifully for you.
Best regards,
John

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Wonderful emotional write! Tinka, one of your best!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Ahhh... healing warmth of our glorious Sun! Take care, Poetess! Nice author photo update--- I should do the same ;-)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

the depths of your soul leaps out in this very revealing poem ...

well done!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

excellent write ....Tinka
enjoyed so much

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

nicely done

Reviewed by Felix Perry

This is one of your finest Tinka and I truly love the accompanying music with it sounds soooooo 60's area that brings me back in time.
Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Tinka,

The metaphors, the symbolism, the imagery, and the verse are simply brilliant - BRILLIANT!! Bravo!!

Blessings my friend,

Robert

Reviewed by Paul Williams

A superb metaphorical write this one Tinka...another crafted gem.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

stay with the sun Tink, it is your hard earned choice. Mind over matter. enjd your dark to sun piece. watch those spiders. And remember you can still dance. Hopefully your smiling features still work also. hehehe. G

Reviewed by George Carroll

You sparkle in this one, Tinka

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu

Tinka
I cannot agree less
This is a great poem from a great lady
who has a way with words.

Great offering!

Emeka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Keep reaching for the Light Tinka!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by E T Waldron

I agree with Aberjhani, Tinka! This is a masterpiece!
Goes to top of list! Great art and music to match!

Reviewed by Aberjhani

What a splendid portrait of spiritual striving to overcome emotional trauma. The metaphorical imagery is unique and moves the reader to genuine compassion for the narrator. Enjoyed this very much.

Also tranquility without