My Day The Pits (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

My Day The Pits
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�My Day ~ The Pits� Courage is nothing more Than a dumb f#cking ass Shitting on every ones head Taking a deep breath�sigh Know it�s okay for things to end I was told once It�s a good thing The days of stiletto heal have passed Cause they are deadly things Getting one of those Little rubber pins That entered your skull out A terrible thing indeed!! My day has been the pits okay Someone has giving me the fits And shivered my bloody tits But According to Dr. Phil Well He said it�s okay It will just give me a lift But Perfectionism Played me for a fool again And courage Nothing more Than a dumb f#cking old fool As a private darkness entered my soul The sun an abyss�no thrill My house a living hell Living With a dumb f#cking ass Called A L C O H O L *!!!!!!!!* Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 24, 2005

alcohol is your friend Tink, i use to love too drink but I couldn't afford the checking cashing afterwards, I'm better off without it. Everyone was drinking Coors light last night and it was tempting. G

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

Yeah...I used to have a love/hate relationship with alcohol...we've since parted company, at least for today. Well done, Tinka.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

LOL...I don't know whether to laugh or cry.

Tinka, have you ever read the book or seen the movie Dolores Claiborne? A famous line from the movie (I never read the book) was, "Sometimes Being A B!tch Is All A Woman Has To Hang On To..."

Take care. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

I gave it up, six years ago. I guess poetry is my drink of choice now. Best wishes

Peace and sunshine

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

I hope your day is much better today, Tinka. You expressed your frustration and anguish very powerfully in these verses. Love, peace, and strength to you. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 22, 2005

Aw Tinks I wish you'd just get away from it.
Thoughts and prayers with you...
Love,
eileen

Reviewed by A PAX

Every day is a new beginning :)

Reviewed by George Carroll

If the drink don't get you the spirits will.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

I agree this is written well.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

well said

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Aw, take a drink and chill. LOL Don't throow that thing over here.

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Sometimes when I have a reallllllllllllly bad day I end up writing a good poem, it's a change from the monotony of the usual days
Love your poem, Tinka
Love and peace
Huda

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Tinka,

(((HUGS)))

My advice, and I'm no Dr. Phil, would be to just get out. Why subject yourself to that pain day after day? You're better than that. If he won't do nothing to help himself, it's more than high time to take care of YOURself.

Powerful, poignant poem that many will relate to--

((((((HUGS)))))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Gee, I think we can all relate to this one...hope tomorrow is much, much better!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

I think this is a good one cause even though you may be haaaving bad day you are still handling it with grace and humour. I love it.

Felix

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Tinka,

So very sorry to hear of your day in the pits ... I pray that all will be well soon ... never give up!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

sounds like you are having a bad one too. i am as well; i hate my life!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(

I was told once

Cause they are deadly things