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Deep Within The Void
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*Deep Within The Void* *As I sit here* *Back within the abyss of my senses* *To think things over* *Heat of the moment* *Leaving flames upon my cheeks* *Alone* With only my deepest thoughts *Thoughts of wasted days and nights* *Anxious to do something positive* *Arranging books and note pads* *Sharpening pencils several times* *For many days now* *I had been gathering a few thoughts* *But had been waiting* *For the right moment* *To pen them down* *I did not sleep much the nights before* *My thoughts went to places* *So very far from here* *As I thought about many things* *Most of the time it was about you* *And every time* *The moon was growing pale* *With a feint light in the east* *Even then my thoughts were deep* *But when the sun* *Started to show face each day* *Still wide awake* *The smile just died* *And only left* *A small choking sound* *Deep within the void* *Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes*

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 10, 2005

Dearest Tinks,

awwww you have made me cry with this, I feel your pain and hurt. An eloquent write Tinks and so full of raw emotion. The sun does shine, and the moon will glow with absolute brightness.

warm hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 3, 2005

This is a sad one, missing someone does hurt. Unfortunately it's a part of life, we must all experience. I hope it is short-lived void.

Take care

Reviewed by jude forese

sadness permeates this poem yet it is so eloquently written i found myself absorbed in its cryptic passionate plea ...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

This is so deep and melancholy Tinks, but I agree with the others you keep growing as a poet....beautiful!!

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Very expressive write and an outpouring of honest feelings that divulge the passion that overflows your heart. Well said Tink.

Felix

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Lots of detours in that Void, Tinka, be careful, dear poet!
Excellent write.
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Anyway, have a happy day!

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Oh this is deeply emotional Tinks, you need to escape that void.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2005

Sometimes that is all there is, Tinka. Sometimes it is difficult to keep on keeping on. But you will because you have heart.

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

The moon was growing pale
But your poetry is growing more beautiful every poem
keep the den shining with your wonderful poems

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Yup Tinks it is Time to escape the void..

Justwatchusthrashtheaussies...

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Very in-depth poem!
Excellent!
PEACE',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Dale Clark

It is deep and sad but so very good.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Very deep and far too sad, Tinka - and I truly believe that it's time for you to escape that void.

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

You are not alone if your pen is with you.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

so fraught with deep emotion and pain; you are in my prayers today, tinks! well done yet again; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron

oh my this one is deep and teary Tinka. But you do them so well!
Excellent poem!

Love,
Eileen

With only my deepest thoughts