Standing by the window in the dark Moonbeams seeps through the night Coldness reached my eyes and heart A milky glaze upon my face Arms embrace this body cold as ice Coldness of night
Dripping down window’ pain Just to leave a trace of wetness behind Nothing came close to the texture And the deep taste… of this love that I feel Hoping it could take away All the pain of all those yesterdays And praying I could overcome My fear of my tomorrow’ Naked in the dark I stand… cold Heart screaming out loud Will this cycle ever end! Depending on a love never meant Now just fading away till the end In sterile cold embrace
And perfect emptiness I stand “Till death do us part” The End
Well... I am probably not the right person to give advice. I also don't manage to find the person that is worth my love.
But Tinka - we should never give up hope. Let's keep on hoping and praying and looking around. How many men are on this earth? There should be Mr. Right for us somewhere.
Love
Amira
So filled with heartache this write. Don't allow it to become empty Tinks, you have so much to offer and give. Sometimes in life situations are not perfect, but patience and perseverance make it all worth while.
Tinka, this poem is perfect. If it's not your single best poem to date, it is definitely one of the top, top. You reached in deep and pulled out a story, delivered in few words, that so many of us battle with on a daily basis, but are ill-equiped to communicate with such eloquence. See Tinka, I knew you would understand: you and I are both trapped in a block of ice.
Can you tell, I really liked this poem? LOL....~ Sara
As always Tink your work is like silk drifting down on a puff of a breeze, delicate and heartwarming but always with just the right amount of sad bittersweet memoried of what was or what could have been. Sweet....
Felix
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But Tinka - we should never give up hope. Let's keep on hoping and praying and looking around. How many men are on this earth? There should be Mr. Right for us somewhere.
Love
Amira
So filled with heartache this write. Don't allow it to become empty Tinks, you have so much to offer and give. Sometimes in life situations are not perfect, but patience and perseverance make it all worth while.
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Excellent poem Tinka!
Love,
Eileen
This thing call love can take one down many paths, some unpleasant.
Pen on lady penner
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excellent write
William .....Peace & Love
Can you tell, I really liked this poem? LOL....~ Sara
Felix
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