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A poem I rearranged to fit this bit!! ********* Time The time has come To surrender I am no pretender My emotions tender and weak What shall I do If I try to seek For the love I need I am in dispute The one I really need Left me in the nude On a route That leads me to nowhere To a detour Or is it a Cull - de - sac Without a doubt In a circle of no hope No were to go Without love, Without hope Without power How the hell Do you expect me To cope in the dark Without my only hope Without bloody electricity The memories of us Fly across The wind swept sky All that I love for so long All the silt of my yearning Comes to rest in me once again The grief of all loving And not bloody voltage in power All damn day!! Sighhhhh Copyright (c) 2006 Tinka Boukes**

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 23, 2006

Quite a bit of power and energy here, Tinky - maybe you could bottle it.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

I immensely enjoyed this rant, Tinka!! Well done!!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 22, 2006

Tinks, you are a powerhouse all by yourself...splendid writing!
love and peace...Carole

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

tinka,

hope you are back on soon! excellent thought provoker you have penned here; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Tinka,

Thought provoking questions you ask in this powerful write. We've come to depend on electricity; we couldn't live without it, as our ancestors did. Excellent!

Hope your power comes back on soon.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

The idea is frightening for sure, but you and I and all the writers in the world would cope even if it meant scratching our words on tree bark by candle light, we love our work too much.

Felix

Reviewed by George Carroll

Went without electric for three days in the dead of Winter. Would not want to face that for a protracted period of time. Hope it's resolved quickly.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Great write!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by m w

We only appreciate our luxeries and technologies when we are without them LOL

Reviewed by E T Waldron

With your high voltage you could be all the energy you need. Tap into yourself Tinka!;-)Great poem. sis!

eT

Reviewed by Peter Paton

I think you have been drinking from the same fountain that the rejuvenated Karla has been partaking from recently Tinks !
Your poetry is soaring to a new high level of distinction and alacrity
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Wayyyyyyyy to gooooooooooo, Tinka! Whata blast. Whadda rant. Whadda poem. You are coming on stronggggggg.

My emotions tender and weak