Don’t know how to sum this up How to work this theory out And how to explain this to myself That a claw shows you an animal But it is still not to say it’s a Lion That nor life or communication And the time of space between here and there And a million light years away Still cannot cover that big black hole That emptiness inside of me I find a void in this earth Something is missing here It’s like my brain gives me a vision Like I am always going in circles But can’t understand the sphere And what I really want from God And as from people It becomes like a misty Mysterious vision to me Clouds covers me and leaves This emptiness within me But still….. I can see something written In the brightness of the stars But I have to write it in dust myself It’s like I see all the brightness of life But lives in the gravel of misfortune It makes my brain play rock music But dances a waltz instead How do I work this out I am going crazy Insane Mad Or ?
Bravo!!!! What a ride you took me on!
That a claw shows you an animal
But it is still not to say it’s a Lion <--- excellant verse!!
i loved this entire piece, made me feel abd see the question
and confusion. Wonderful!! \/vvv\/ <------ Rottie Smile
Profound illustration of the shadows of doubt and vision that sometimes float like clouds through the poetic consciousness. Enjoyed the read tremendously.
Aberjhani
OR you are ALIVE. Sensitive, intelligent, and involved. Answers--?
Damn few, if any. Questions--? So, so many. Crazy NOT to see and wonder. Agonize at times. Looking into The Well is terrifying. . .especially when you feel you are near the bottom. I myself have literally 'seen black.' Probably will again. Try not to think about it. IS light and the more we connect, the brighter it
gets. Sometimes clouds cover. Sometimes the light seems to go out.
There are people who seem to specialize in trying to put it out! But we know it is there, don't we? Tinka, you sound a lot saner than I feel much of the time. Bit mad the way to go?? Never see the dark, don't appreciate the light?? Begin to understand what it is, and what it means? Full o' it, am I? Guilty as charged. But you know
this comes from my heart. Keep writing, but most of all, keep being Y O U. Love and Hugs, Pea
What always works for me: is to find someone who needs something from me, when I am in service so to speak, my own problems and doubts and whatever; fade far into the background, and when they retrurn, they are always way better than when I left them, to help sonmebody else. IT will get better, sis Art
The Creator made man in his image, thus leaving us with an overwhelming palette of emotions. However he did give man the freedom of choice...which at times, seems unpredictable (mysterious) to others. It is us, ourselves, who must be clear to maintain focus, for that point of reference should never be lost. Crazy? As an artist...I certainly hope you are to some degree crazy which would denote the passion of life that fuels us as artists.
Love, Amor
Tinka...step back from your body and leave all emotions aside and look at yourself...within. You will see this beautiful flower alive and wanting to be vibrant and with a little nourishment it grows and then...you'll see the power play of positive over negatives is winning.
My best to you...
...and my prayers dear Sis.
Love,
Susan
These are times you have to step back from yourself. YOu are too focused on your needs and have been overwhelmed by them. Take a vacation from yourself Tinka and find something else to focus on. This may sound strange, or uncaring, but believe me I wish only for your best. You've been in this rut for too long now. Change it while you still can.
Jesus wrote in the dust, too....you are working it out, Tinka-girl!
Watch and see...........been there; you're on the way back out now!!!!
Keep up the good work...you know what I see here? You shaped your poetry like a calligraphy pen nub.....it's all in the words you will write...remember, words have the power of life or death...choose them carefully, Sweetie!
We all question our purpose from time to time...wanting to plan our destiny. But it's already written for you if you look into your heart, listen, and believe patiently. George is right, it's all about giving back...and remember, you do this with everything you write. Thank you for this one.
Taylor~
Tinka this is a great write though you are not going mad you are no doubt having to take a second look at the world you know and reevaluate what once was for what will be. My thoughts are with you.
It's not so much what we want from God but what we can give back to Him. He gave His all to save us, what more can we expect. His love He gladly gives us everyday.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2006
Keep writing it out and going with the flow. Your not going insane. Insane people generally think they have no problems.
Tinka you are not alone, feeling destined for something more than our circumstance affords. Its the greatness within yearning to get out, to fulfill our purpose on this rock. Stay strong, don't give up... you are very sane and well grounded.
You are still searching in life for your Destiny...
And the puzzle and enigma of it all, will become clear when you really start believing it will...
Believe...and keep on believing in yourself..
I love the graphic...it reminds me of a Escher drawing
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That a claw shows you an animal
But it is still not to say it’s a Lion <--- excellant verse!!
i loved this entire piece, made me feel abd see the question
and confusion. Wonderful!! \/vvv\/ <------ Rottie Smile
Aberjhani
Damn few, if any. Questions--? So, so many. Crazy NOT to see and wonder. Agonize at times. Looking into The Well is terrifying. . .especially when you feel you are near the bottom. I myself have literally 'seen black.' Probably will again. Try not to think about it. IS light and the more we connect, the brighter it
gets. Sometimes clouds cover. Sometimes the light seems to go out.
There are people who seem to specialize in trying to put it out! But we know it is there, don't we? Tinka, you sound a lot saner than I feel much of the time. Bit mad the way to go?? Never see the dark, don't appreciate the light?? Begin to understand what it is, and what it means? Full o' it, am I? Guilty as charged. But you know
this comes from my heart. Keep writing, but most of all, keep being Y O U. Love and Hugs, Pea
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(
In the brightness of the stars
Then there truly must be a brighter tomorrow on the way, Tinky.
Love, Amor
My best to you...
...and my prayers dear Sis.
Love,
Susan
Watch and see...........been there; you're on the way back out now!!!!
Keep up the good work...you know what I see here? You shaped your poetry like a calligraphy pen nub.....it's all in the words you will write...remember, words have the power of life or death...choose them carefully, Sweetie!
love you&your children! Rhonda
Taylor~
Fee
You are still searching in life for your Destiny...
And the puzzle and enigma of it all, will become clear when you really start believing it will...
Believe...and keep on believing in yourself..
I love the graphic...it reminds me of a Escher drawing
Peter