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Constant Sorrow{repost}
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~Constant Sorrow~

{One Year Later}

Fixed doubt constant, like a pilgrim band


One that obligates, does not change


Values itself in relation to idle variables


Solutions provided by theory, never denied


The difference between the distances from any point to let it ‘B’

With its’ standardized values whose parameters form the unpromised land

Its’ effectiveness obtrusively defined


Measured by sorrow’s ability to capture me at such a young age


Relates its’ constant velocity to my perpetual wish


Imprints an idea in my already clouded mind


Constant tears dripping have hollowed out my soul


The realm of my inner secrecy now public domain


Always in constant acceleration, always in constant retreat

I gravitate toward its’ pull, the day is the night

Inadequate fences erected against its’ unfairness, holes in the links left unguarded

I find myself sacrificing the essentials, doomed like a listing ship

With my inner voice crying, into the abyss formed by tears I leapt

Three fingers up in succession: one for sorrow; one for self-pity; the dying one for silence surmised

The impatience endured is un-godlike

Took the beaten path of sorrow, lead to where sorrow is unknown

Forgot it was often remembered as emotional strife

The abyss forms a river that enters the plains as a torrent, then a malicious stream

Enclosed by body after body of the condemned, tender for another’s pain

Held in place until the sorrow makes us wise.


Copyright © September 1, 2005 ~ 2006 Tinka Boukes & Dennis O’Bell
 
 


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 Reviews of "Constant Sorrow{repost}"
Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on September 3, 2006
Three fingers up in succession: one for sorrow; one for self-pity; the dying one for silence surmised <----- abosolutely wonderful verse! The entire poem was awesome!

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on September 2, 2006
'Held in place until the sorrow makes us wise.'

And you are wise, Tinka, you certainly are.

A most powerful and arresting write!

Love&Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed on September 2, 2006
Nice collab, Tinka and Dennis; very well done! BRAVA! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
Very nice collaboration poem. Sorrow is the thread from which the fabric of this poem is woven, though it is wise to remember that the dawn is always the most spectacular after a dark and starless night and hope is the key to the door that leads to tomorrow's blessings...Wonderful work, both of you.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on September 1, 2006
This is a keeper! I want to print Tink~ YOur choice of words are incredible, I love how I feel so drawn in, Intense and very deep, you took me under in all you were feeling! Terrific! I love this! Warmly *She* oxo

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
There is too much pain in this world and I would like to see more happiness. Yet you've captured such pain wonderfully well. I hope for hope even if the ship is on its side, sinking. Victor

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
You captured will the pain of emotional attachment and loss.

Fee

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
A richly embroidered tapestry of the inner self that boldly maps the contours of an evolving creative soul. A true pleasure to read this work of art called CONSTANT SORROW.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
Incredible write Tinka...incredible depth and insight...just all over an incredible pen.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
God, that was heavy and deep
and the language itself, was elegant, wise, intelligent.....yet understandable......the constant sorrow can be expressed thru poetry...

The realm of my inner secrecy now public domain




these are the roots of poetry Tinka
this is amamzing
a keeper

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
sorrow does have it's reward ... it reminds us not to continue being victimized by the pain of a "malicious stream" ...

nicely executed collab ...

Reviewed on September 1, 2006
When there's no sorrows in life,
there won't be any happiness.

Just be glad that you have lived through the sorrows
and become wiser.

Wonderful post, Tinka!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
Superb collab! You know it is utterly amazing how much we can hurt each other. I look forward to that new home where true only love abounds.

Eileen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
You Still Got To Stop Looking Back Then Thee's No Sorrow (To Be Found)In MIND!

Your Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
The sorrow makes us wise - how so sadly true so often, Tinky.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
Sad but there is a lot of you in this poem.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
Well Penned Tinka
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
Tinka

Can feel the pain and torment in this melancholy pen..
Still you have courage and valor to fight to the end..
Never ever give up my friend..
There is light at the end of the tunnel

Love
Peeter


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