Silent Act
She‘s staring into the night
She breaks down in silent tears
She has no clue where to go
She lost her way
No where to go
All she can do
Is listen to the silence of the night
A silence so intense
Much deeper than her thoughts
Millions but millions of silvery stars
Embrace the night sky
But she still feels so alone
Just staring into the night
Darkness surrounds her body
Upon the shoreline of love
She listen to the ocean’s flow
That goes deeper as she walk
Deeper into the water
To find everlasting peace!!
Copyright © September 26, 2006 Tinka Boukes
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You have vividly described the human spirit, which cries out for relief......thank God, you also know there is only One who gives that peace that passes understanding AND also provides the Everlasting peace!
Powerfully penned, Sis!
Love&Hugs, Rhonda
you've out done yourself with this
Marvelous romantic poem
Thanks I loved it
Love & Peace
William
You reach in and grab the reader's heart with powerfully emotive poetry like this...this one is one you can f e e l. So effectively penned, well done!
((((HUGS)))), love and prayers, Karla.
Stay well Sis
Lve Ch'erie
Music and pic perfect! Get happy Sis!...ET
Beautiful and sad.
I wish you well.
Love,
Susan
Hope all is well..
x0x0
TRASK
There is no peace in a death without God.
Beautifully written, but it makes me want to plead with her
to look up, know that the stars were made by a loving Creator,
and HE loves her.
Connie
this is too sad
no one is worth a walk into the deep
I agree with Richard below..
The bottom line is we need only God's Love and Comfort in our life..
He is the maker and breaker of all things
Love and Light
Peter
Suicide never solves problems, but creates bigger ones. She will have to come back and do it again with less gifts, until she gets it right.
Elizabeth
Susan
Love, Taylor
Fee
Paul;-)
Enchanting imagery and poetic beauty abound in "Silent Act".
Long healthy creative life, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
This is a beautiful mind painting that is laced together with those threads necessary for pursuing peace, and meaning, and Truth.
We are all so vulnerable. And when it comes right down to it - we need very little but the love of another, and the understanding of those around us to fulfill our lives.
In friendship ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
love,
dove