Collaborative Thoughts (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Oh not smart enough to figure life out yet

Love could be so innocent like the virgin bride� but

Literally it�s broken� embraced in coldness oh so bad!!

As it wait for those footprints of life to surpass

Blood mixed with dirt and abuse

Oh the silence of the shadows speak to her tonight

Reached out and touched her cheek blindly

Almost innocent� so quiet�deep within the night

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Power shines on in your pen today! Very well done, Tinka; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Oh Tinka, how deeply this beautiful poem touched my heart, so poignant and excellently written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on October 2, 2006

Your poetry is taking on a great flow. I just fell thru this like butter!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

Sad thoughts at the end of sad day(s), chased by constant rethinking, gives me the feel of exhaustion, Tinka. Yearning deep...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

Nothing is impossible; if you believe you can make it so. The difficult part having the courage to let go of that which holds us back so that we can finally move forward. Nice pen, Tinka.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

life is all about coping and hoping for change ...when we put our minds to it, anything is possible ... a new life always just within our grasp ...

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

You have entered into a season of transition....the bridge is forthcoming...you have to carefully choose "to where", Tinka.

'Thy word is a lamp unto my feet, and a light unt my PATH...'

Love&Prayers&Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

And, New Life Will Come,i.e.IF YOU LET IT COME...

TRASK

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

Tinks

You are in a period of transisiton, that requires both tact and patience..

Just be assured that the One who brought you into this world, will extricate you from your present predicament successfully

Cheers

Peter

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

When the hurt of heartache reaches the point of no return it is the few lucky ones who have such a person to rest their weary hearts and heads on. Lovely write Tinka though just a litte sad.

FEe

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

Very soft and touching, a new life will come, timing is everything, waiting for the old one to run its course.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

Loved this one, the music is very effective...I love your work. Keep on writing and I'll keep reading.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

A new life to come..Pregnant..Congrats...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

Gosh Tinks ...

The sobering part of it is that we may spend a lifetime trying to figure it out. And then when we're ready to go through that last doorway, we suddenly understand.

Our dreams are often the fuel that keep us pressing forward. I know in my life they are. If I didn't have dreams that kept me focused, I would be a miserable wreck.

A potent write sissy ...
Oodles of schmoodles ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

Your romantic moods give your poems quite a twist that send us thinking. Victor

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 1, 2006

No ones smart enough to figure it out Tinka! Best we can do is hope and pray we make right choices, and that takes a lot of thinking before hand, which most of us never do;-)...Hope you get that new life you're looking for!

Eileen

Collaborative Thoughts

Oh not smart enough to figure life out yet

Love could be so innocent like the virgin bride� but

Telling herself not to love beyond reach

Vexatious thoughts subsided slowly