Me On Top Of The World” (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

The pigsty Queen

On top of my LDV world

Trying to keep things in place

Not to pollute

When I scoot from this place

Down another rocky road

Driving ahead on high speed

Now if you dare to laugh… J

Be sure there is no pee

Or veggies to squash

I am on top of the world…not!!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 18, 2007

enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 17, 2007

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on June 17, 2007

Nature indeed brings out writings from seeds - evol=love {Ted}

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

You are a joy Tink!
YOu look happy and I like that!
fruits of passion!
as this poem lifts a sad soul!
Thank you Tink
I simply adore!
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
StaY Positive!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

a sweet fruit among the bunch, can you fall off intime for lunch, you little entertainer

Reviewed by Pamela garner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

cute

Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

.. tinka, wow, the way express emotions into words sweeps me away, this poem had such a humorous effect, light hearted effect, a pleasure to read, mike

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

Oh dear, love the picture and this wonderful poem Tinka!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

Tinka, you are beautiful! Don't ever doubt yourself! Very well done emotive write; brava, (((Dear Friend)))!

((((HUGS)))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by William Haynes

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

sounds like a pleasant drive
bill

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

But you look so comfy! Cute write!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

If you like to be smiling from the top...that's OK with me, we need more smiles around us after hearing the news.
Georg

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

What a pic LOL, the pigs are lucky to have you.... nice to see your smile. Fun write Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 19, 2007

Great picture a beautiful smile! Love this upbeat write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Yes, I am laughing and you look ravishinly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! At least you are still smiling, great.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

always good to be on top of things ;)

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Hey Tinka, wait for me!
With that smile of yours and the upbeat tempo, I'm ready for a party.

What an uplifting, On-top-of-the-world combo. Fabulous!

Richard

Reviewed by Gloria Buono

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

What a lovely, "uplifting" prose. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

You sure look good to me up there mz Tinky!
Better than vegging out inside on a sofa
watching soap opera's!;-) Good for you!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

A kindred keeper of cardimom!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

You look good up there - on Top of the World, Tinky!

Now don't eat all those veggies yourself - save some for the piggys!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Lovely attitude from a lovely lady with the music to make all smile contained in her heart and on her site.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

You are a hoot, Tinka~

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Like your thingy country music.....Tinky
You sho is fuuny
Thank you For sharing

love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Wow That's a great way to work!
In this picture it looks like
Your having to much FUN be careful with the squash!!
Love this write!!
Love and Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

a cute write!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

are a you sure you aren't crushing grapes to make some wine
funny girl ...this friend of mine
love ya
Walt

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

Tinka,

Looks like yer having fun and that's what really counts. Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2007

I just bet your a lot of fun fun whatever you
do do sweets..
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