“YOU Re-Form Me”
Yes so many times when I was down
I would sing the song
That says: “YOU are the potter
I am the clay...”
Please re-form me today
My existing heart without delay
To be perfect in every way!!
Try to unwrap
This bitter feeling deep within
I tripped once before
And fell flat on my face for sure
Now I am falling for you
Tap-dancing – to our love song
But if our journey has to end!!
When we have to say goodbye someday
Remember my love
My heart will be left in pieces
Scattered like a million grains of sand
Missing you
Yes so many times when I am down
I still sing the song
That says: YOU are the potter
I am the clay...
Please re-form my heart
This existing doubt without delay
To be perfect in every way my love!!
I think you have the power to do it
I believe and trust the thought of YOU
That no one
Can ever make US grow apart again
Since the first day I have met you
You captured my heart
Copyright © Tinka Boukes
October 8, 2007 . 12.03 am
Reviewed by Stan Potter
{ If Stan Potter is his real name }
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10/7/2007 |
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This is just stupid. This is not poetry.
Cheers,
Stan |
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/7/2007 |
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Thank you Stan Potter....your the perfect example of the askew potter.
POTTER in your own EYES...for just making a crooked heart more crooked.....but that's what devils are there for Right?
Thank GOD my Darling POTTER is not the Devil!!
Best to try and find a POTTER to RENEW YOURS TOO!!
Maybe a LOVE Tinka will do anyways....that might bring a little light to YOUR heart!!
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Ron
And the it (stan potter) can go take a long long walk on a short short pier! He got me too. Shall we have another BBQ?
Love
Annie
Now darlin Tink, this was a GEM, and no amount of critique from the likes of the above will sway me otherwise..
Did you know that I dont eat Pork!
I am allergic to it really bad, yes....last time I accidently ate pork in patties at a BBQ, ended up in hospital with an IV and in danger of losing my last baby, that was 9 years ago....I get a SNIFF of Pork now and I tell yah, I'm onto it.
Hugs to yah
;) Ch'erie
How did I miss reviewing this lovely poetry. I guess my head is still in the clouds. Thank YOU.
Walt
Awesome and tender poem, Tinka.
Kathy
I truly loved and enjoyed this one Tinka
Love & Peace Be with You
William
Be safe,
Karen
This is beautifully expressed and it brings many
images to mind. This carefully written piece has
Beautiful emotional level of love!
Stunning thoughts!!
Love Peace and many hugssss....Morning Star
ET
Poo on the stan freak....
Your friend always
Ron
If you are really the clay I will make a vault with it to keep my heart.
Georg
The RIGHT kind of love looks good on you. :) Keep reaching: it's closer than you think. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Ignore the Potter kid. :)
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~ As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I see that the old geezer Stan Potter ( aka G Yale) is back with his reviews. I wonder how he ties in me, you, Feelix, Jerry and Walt. There has to be a clue here. I think I know who he is. I've reported mine to matt.
Susan
Fee
You captured my heart. . ."BEAUTIFUL!
Your heart seethes with His love...
Amen to your pen!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
t&h
john+
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