Done And Dusted (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Done And Dusted

Drained from emotions

Onto a mission of self destruction

Not to share...not to believe

Even to enjoy another moment

After many hours of waiting

Not you...not me

Dared to take the chance

Days became dark...nights darker

Useless hours of hope...wanting

Seeing you fade away

To pursue romance...not you...not me

Endless hours of dreaming

Done and dusted

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 17, 2010

My hope is that those endless hours are over.

Ron

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on September 13, 2010

A torrent of complex emotions so difficult to get ones arms around Tinka. I hope you are well and ready to stay with us in the den my dear friend. May love and peace be always with you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 10, 2010

I can relate, TinkaSweets. It is sad that one can give so much love and it is not returned. I hope you are doing well. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on September 8, 2010

You do these well Tinks, done and dusted is about how I feel, however I'm trying to go for a better thrill, hugs&love

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on September 7, 2010

Deeply touching Tinka.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on September 5, 2010

Beautiful and haunting, Tinka.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 5, 2010

better than being done & busted ;)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on September 5, 2010

Haunting words, Tinks...but so good to read your words again hope you join us more. Take care, hugs

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on September 5, 2010

Such a poignant write, Tinka. Beautiful work.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

Very beautiful writing sweet lady ...nice to read you again stay safe and well.Hugsss

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

poignant read

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

Very sad bittersweet poem on what seems to be Unrequited love.
You as always have a wonderful way with words.
So much meaning in so few words.
Well done.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

Eptimoizes sorrow with depth..hurtful to read, stimulating!
Extending all my love to you this day dearest Tink..xxx
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

Beautiful writing, Tinka; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

Beautifully done, Tinka.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

Excellent poem ~ not to be forgotten!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

Those things happen beautiful brown eyes. It happens when both are not willing to chance of being hurt. Don't be a stranger write some more.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY