Except for 1 s missing on caress, the story in poem form is great. The feelings of anxiety, sorrow, bewilderment and doubt are all there. I can see the tears in the eyes of the speaker, whose heart has been broken beyond repair. Something I know a little about. Where indeed gentle breeze, is your soft caress?
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
I think this line should read as "never to be caressed." But I can "feel" what is expressed in this poem. I have lived this situation. Thank you for sharing, TinkaSweets. Love and best wishes,
Book 3 continues the Commander and the Chief's adventures in political intrigue, superstition, old feuds, and the search of Nikola Tesla's missing papers in this Close Encounter of the Weird Kind.
“We’re going to use nine megaton warheads in space and we’re not sure they’re large enough to be effective. Why would you even consider using kiloton-range surface-to-air warheads as back-up?” The answer was succinct. “Because they’re all we have.”
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Powerfully written, one can relate to the hurting. Prolly more bitter than sweet.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Peace, Carole~
Blessings,
Christine
Your cousin is quite talented. You can fell the pain and anquish in her work.
Mary
Love,
Connie
I'VE MISSED THAT GENTLE BREEZE OF LIFE MYSELF.
WITH LOVE ..RON
Ron
always a pleasure to read
love & peace be with you
William
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas.
Regis