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The Gods Punishment
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The Gods Punishment ~~~*~~~ There's a thought of a glorious image embeded deep in my mind of you As you blest my vision the last time I saw you watching me walk away. now the gods punishes me for I am unable to create A song , An ode, A sonnet A word, A line, A verse. They have punished me by drying my inkwell Relieving me Of my quill Castrating my ability to create images upon the virgin parchment Before me. By: William Bonilla D'Artagnan 12/13/2011

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Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 24, 2012

HMMM...I DON'T KNOW, WILLIAM. NOT A TIME OF REST, CONTEMPLATION... REFILLING OR RENEWAL? BUT OF PUNISHMENT?!! WE MUSTN'T EVER FORGET; WE ARE 'HIS' INSTRUMENT, NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND...WE HAVE TO WAIT. BUT I GUESS EACH POET LOOKS AT IT DIFFERENTLY, HOWEVER...I AM GLAD TO NOTE THAT IT WAS A WHILE AGO THAT YOU WROTE THIS AND I TODAY I READ 'SHE CONFESSED'. WELCOME BACK!!!!! LOVE YA! MANY BLESSINGS AND MUCH FAITH TO YOU AND YOURS.

JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 10, 2012

Given time, I am sure ur image will be created & such an image it will be...maybe its the virgin part u r having trouble with...? ;-)e

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 10, 2012

Your muse is gone? I don't think so, because this poem surely speaks to everyone. I see however, that you wrote it last year.

Let's do a collab soon. Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 10, 2012

i know the feeling--i have felt the same after my sister's passing

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on May 10, 2012

Judging by the way you penned this one, William, you're not being punished at all! Great writing!!!!

Anna

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 10, 2012

certainly an interesting way of
looking at it, William, and unusual, too.

i like it a lot

john

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