You see that freckle
-----------Well I feel you there
Tangled follicles
-----------> And you're over here
At the stop light
Driving to town
I sense your sparkle
I know your frown
Tasting blackberry
Raspberry jam
I rock in your passion
You're where I am
Quantum physics
Inner eye
I'm inside you
You're inside my....
MY Oh My
What a treat
You're within me
It's a detailed feast!
what a Russian doll you are, susan. There is layer upon layer to this poem... 'a detailed feast'.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Sumtin' ta think about. Uh, I'm a-thinking. Okay. Thought dat out and come up wid dis. You won purdy good . . . er . . . blackberry-jam sweetie wid juicy-sounding words, y'all.
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Ron
Love Tinka
Adorable. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Eileen
That sounds a good place to be...lols
Love the picture..
Peter