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Freckled Treat
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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You see that freckle
-----------Well I feel you there
Tangled follicles
-----------> And you're over here
At the stop light
Driving to town
I sense your sparkle
I know your frown
Tasting blackberry
Raspberry jam
I rock in your passion
You're where I am
Quantum physics
Inner eye
I'm inside you
You're inside my....

MY Oh My
What a treat
You're within me
It's a detailed feast!

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 Reviews of "Freckled Treat"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 30, 2007
Love to eat from freckled flesh--yum, yum.

Ron

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
nice picture you've penned. Lady J

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
My Oh My, This is a Treat!! Love this. Delectable.

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Have you forgotten that a man can take just so much of this?
Now, let's see, where were you,and where be I, and what were we saying and hearing?????
Good stuff for a morning in the mountains... as it would be most any morning, anywhere!
Let's keep the lid on, now! Love, Bill

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Okayyyyyyy!!

Is that a LEVI jean??

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
I got a smile from this!
I think I've seen you driving by.
Doug

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Raspberry Jam and Quantum Physics,
I see the relevance here.
Very interesting.

Walt

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
WOW!

Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Excellent write, Susan; very well penned! BRAVA! Love the pic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
. . . and all along, by its title, I thought you had mispelled it and the poem was about speckled trout . . . drat!!! . . . LOL

Reviewed on November 25, 2007
Delightful! Delicious! Well done, Susan.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I, too, love the image, in verse and pic. :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
I love that picture of you and I enjoyed this write as I thought of how sweet it would be to be there hearing you recite it.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on November 25, 2007
More than quantum anything...Detailed fiesta you are at a minimum ~evol*love <>Ted

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
This write really romps...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
lushous write Susan
loved it
Peace & Love

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
such a passionate write!

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 24, 2007
Sounds absolutely delectable.

Kathy


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