Take a canvas big as earth...paint it midnight blue
Synchronize this mass with stars
Bleached and shining through
Then sketch a moon so grand with charm
In golden shades and hues
Of illuminating phosphorous
In ochres, whites and blues
A comet shooting...tail afire
Trailing through the sky
Passed novas smiling eyes so big
As angels wave bye bye
A swing to sway imagining
With dreams to see us through
And all the pains of life are gone
With nature and her crew
You see the grand finale
As rainbow's pallet fills
With each and every raindrop
That slides down natures hills
Kaleidoscopes of crystal tint
To wash the earth with color
A brush so fine of sable hairs
To make the clouds look fuller
Pastures green with dusted dew
As tears that linger here
Among each blade of slender growth
As mirrors of her tears
For man is tender of this earth
And master of his ways
If we can't do earth better
Then soon, we'll live to pay
Through sacrificing beauty
To dullness of the grays
For now we smile through eyes that see
Never dreaming of the day
When negligence can come to call
Scorn us...demand her pay
When earth was full of true r hues
And we saw her better days.
I have many Nova photos, and some are stunning! Most are!
and to write like this, I only WISH1
YOu touched me deeply with your amazing imagery!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Warmer Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoooxoo
STay Positive!
Generations to come NEED BETTER! LEt US PRAY!
Wow! Your poem so masterfully executed gives me chills as I see earths better days gone forever, as sad as that may seem! However, I think there is the hope that Creator will give us a new and better earth that will be everlasting!
Oh, this is powerfully penned sadness, Susan, I hope we haven't seen the last of Earth's better days ... but like Ed (below), I fear - excellent clarion call for change. Well done.
So precious "All inclusive" souls of energy with lasting grace_love_beauty { On another level of being} .~.~. Because someday this planet will no longer remain "()" Regardless of anything we do or not do _ Excepting this is truly (THE) greatest savior of all .().~ ovovelel (.~.) TedSo
...in agreement with Jerry...as we travel with you...through true r hues...yet to become lost dreams.
colors and shapes of wisdom you write here Susan...
John
a wonderful poem that touches the senses in many ways--the earth in her beauty--described so well as well as human's carelessness
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Ah, I see I'm all alone here tonight . . . The thing is, Susan, your poetry sometimes is so very intense and mind-blowing that a lot of folks become intimidated and hold back their comments . . . This particular piece of literary artwork is a prim-time example . . . You paint such a kaleidoscope of Heavenly beauty as you combine it all within the human psyche that by the time the reader has finished the piece they are breathless and awed . . . You can fill in the gaps between the elements and earth and human spirit better than anyone I have ever read . . . And you can take THAT to whatever bank you feel is worthy . . .
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
and to write like this, I only WISH1
YOu touched me deeply with your amazing imagery!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Warmer Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoooxoo
STay Positive!
Generations to come NEED BETTER! LEt US PRAY!
Love Tinka
Ron
Love,
ET
and your poetry are pictures
Love & Peace be with you
William
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
colors and shapes of wisdom you write here Susan...
John
I love the words you've chosen for this! You are truly gifted!
Love, Pierre