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Your Time is Up
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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This is just verse so don't take it that serious. I don't knock no ones faith, even the non-believer. But I'll say this, you can't pray and talk to scientology.


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Your time is up,
I have come for you.
No need to feel
sad and blue.
You were wasting
precious time anyway.
Hate and meaness was
the extent of your day.


You had your chances,
you even blew your romances.
Instead of spreading love around,
you let hate take over your ground.
After the devilish persuasion,
you did nothing about the invasion.


Humans have enough troubles,
look at Michael jackson
and his monkey Bubbles.
All those humans are an odd bunch,
Even Tom Cruise is out to lunch.
Narrow minded no faith idiotology
believing in nothing but scientology.
He needs to be muzzled,
before he gets other humans puzzled.


You don't need to pack no bags
where you're going
they don't even need body tags.
No use begging for mercy
you hardly gave anyone else
any meaningful courtesy.


Your time is officially up
as of now!


GR


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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Excellent writing,stay well and safe sweet sweet man...Hugsssss

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
LOL!
OK Ok
WE have No Control, but we do have choices!

WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 21, 2007
the judgement?

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 21, 2007
We all have our chances, and how many of us will truly be ready, when our time is up?!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 21, 2007
When it's your time...adios it will be for sure!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 21, 2007
This is so full of truth, my friend. Very sage advice you've given -- far too often, it's too late to change. Our lives are meted out in hours and minutes and it's up to each of us to use that time wisely. This is one of your best!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
Cute, guess that means it is the end of the line.....
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
You pull no punches GMan!!!Excellent poem!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
Hey Grady, have you ever crawled into one of those body bags? I have, just for training. Very confined cramped space. Makes one think of death in a different light until they zip up the bag.I love your poem. love holly

Reviewed on March 20, 2007
I hear ya. Karla's got it down pat! I will just agree with her; it's safer. LOL Very well done, One (hey! I rhymed! LOL)!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on March 20, 2007
One,

When your time is up, time is UP!!!!!! Spot on! Love the way you wrote this ("wasting precious time anyway" LOLOL)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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