This is just verse so don't take it that serious. I don't knock no ones faith, even the non-believer. But I'll say this, you can't pray and talk to scientology.
Your time is up, I have come for you. No need to feel sad and blue. You were wasting precious time anyway. Hate and meaness was the extent of your day.
You had your chances, you even blew your romances. Instead of spreading love around, you let hate take over your ground. After the devilish persuasion, you did nothing about the invasion.
Humans have enough troubles, look at Michael jackson and his monkey Bubbles. All those humans are an odd bunch, Even Tom Cruise is out to lunch. Narrow minded no faith idiotology believing in nothing but scientology. He needs to be muzzled, before he gets other humans puzzled.
You don't need to pack no bags where you're going they don't even need body tags. No use begging for mercy you hardly gave anyone else any meaningful courtesy.
Your time is officially up as of now!
GR
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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Excellent writing,stay well and safe sweet sweet man...Hugsssss
This is so full of truth, my friend. Very sage advice you've given -- far too often, it's too late to change. Our lives are meted out in hours and minutes and it's up to each of us to use that time wisely. This is one of your best!
Love,
CJ
Hey Grady, have you ever crawled into one of those body bags? I have, just for training. Very confined cramped space. Makes one think of death in a different light until they zip up the bag.I love your poem. love holly
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OK Ok
WE have No Control, but we do have choices!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
Love Tinka
Love,
CJ
Be safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
When your time is up, time is UP!!!!!! Spot on! Love the way you wrote this ("wasting precious time anyway" LOLOL)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.