My heart is torn asunder
Standing out in a field of thunder
My arms are spread up to the sky
Me crying, why...oh why
Don’t deceive me, not here, not now
Yes, yes, yes, they’ll always look for a way...somehow
Just love me and leave me screaming for more
I beg you, I demand of you, this I implore
Stay with me now, please...just a little while longer
Your presence always makes me feel so much stronger
It is not him, the loverboy who makes me confused
I love him, but I always feel so abused
You are the one, my king, my sun
Show me the end to the needy one
He has a her, or perhaps it is a him
Chasing all over the internet as if on a whim
This person we’ll assume is a her
She’s cloaked in poetic myrrh
She thinks I am a moron so easily played
Hoping my love stories will leave him betrayed
But I see her standing over there on the side
With secret harmonies, hoping to be his bride
The truth will come out...eventually
Until then I’ll stand out in the rain...perpetually
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Reviews of "Field of Thunder"
Reviewed by elois Masters (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2003
if it weren't for the rain, how'd I wash the back of my neck? The warm summer rain. There's more love in that. Sweet rain drops for you, love. sorry for your heart ache.
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Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2003
This is simply superb, Fantastic write and pic as well. :)
One of these fine days
I'm gonna write a Haiku
Just to pleasure you
Reviewed by Lady Peg
Reviewed on July 14, 2003
Oh Supergirl,
this one shook my blues for a moment.
{tears}}}}}
sometimes I hate love.. yea me that writes about it all the time.. It causes so much strss and pain and sorrow it is the one standing in the cloak..
{tears}
Corpis said mouse drowned still...
Hurracaine sweeping by....
This was excellent sweetie...
PJ
m
Love Tearz
~Chrissie
David
Love
Nico
Well written!
Gina
What a wonderful haiku
You wrote for me too.
One of these fine days
I'm gonna write a Haiku
Just to pleasure you
this one shook my blues for a moment.
{tears}}}}}
sometimes I hate love.. yea me that writes about it all the time.. It causes so much strss and pain and sorrow it is the one standing in the cloak..
{tears}
Corpis said mouse drowned still...
Hurracaine sweeping by....
This was excellent sweetie...
PJ