Our life is designed by the Gods
In the laboratory of the Heaven
With the sprinkle of ambrosia
To embellish the heart of Earth
Our life is built by the parents
In the corridor of their heart
With the fragrance of adore
To create Heaven in the Earth
Our life is driven by the love
In the boulevard of revulsion
With the thought of optimism
To envelope Earth with adore
Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya
Life is designed by Gods
Built by parents
And driven by love
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Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Appealing poetry, happy, pleasant picture coming from a beautiful heart.
Reviewed by Sara Wadington (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Beautifully written~~:)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Bhuwan,
Beautiful write.
Heavens labatory.
You are also very creative yes teach
us more.
Cheers this is wow.
Peg
Reviewed by Aditi Surendra (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Wow damn good man... Great comparisions... thanks for rating my poem :)
Our culture has taught us to believe in many ideas which aren't actually real. Exposing these illusions allows us to recover the power to live our lives according to our deepest desires.
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Beautiful write.
Heavens labatory.
You are also very creative yes teach
us more.
Cheers this is wow.
Peg
Sandie Angel :o)
Jack
Peace & Love,
Susan