excellent write! lovely imagery and i love Indian women with Mount Everest breasts ;)
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
A wonderful write that must fill every man's dream. Extremely well described and exacuted.
But for we old crows who tend to be beyond green with jealousy, may we take comfort that someone might see us this way even if our breasts sag, and wrinkles cover the face. **S** I know we sometimes see the less than perfect man thusly.
(((Bhuwan)))
All jesting aside...this is a really great write.
~Jackie~
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
"Luscious" dazzling write...
Love the imagery and expression in this. Missed reading your work!!
Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Apicture can say a thousand words but the way you captured her essence in words ,we really didn't need to see her lovely photo.
Bhuwan, deliciously dazzling description of how a man in love views the object of his profound affection. I would only ask the heavens that his vision not age with his body and he go to his grave seeing her ever the same as the day he fell in love with her.
Bobbi
Yes, femininity and blessings of womanhood are to be honored and what a remarkable tribute you have portrayed in "A Young Girl In the Freshness of Youth" truly poetic romance! Thank you for sharing this poem and also the heartfelt information on your Bio page....Gwendolyn
Bhuwan...I have never heard a young girl described in quite this way..You're words are like honey...this is so moving...I wish all men thought like you....you are worshhiping her in this poem..absolutely stunning write....I applaud you...floria
This is so wonderfully romantic; the words flow beautifully as you describe her. Wonderful imagery too. I especially loved the last verse, it leaves me smiling... Well penned, my friend!
She is totally gorgeous (the picture) and the way you describe her.
A beautiful poem.
Best wishes
from
kay.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
EXQUISITE Bhuwan!!!! You have an enormous talent for the imagery within this poem is superb...ahhhh...I wish I was young again...well..perhaps don't...there is wondrous beauty in every age...
Thankyou .
And her face, like the early morning sun
Adorned with the fabulous smile
Disperses the fragrance of warmth
And revives the spirit of the whole world
Vesna
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
A man for beauty... So does this mean you are going to trade her in for a new one when she gets old? ;) Sensual feelings. Ahhh, love writing for you all by itself again. Woo hoo! :)
Pecked to Death offers a refreshing perspective on managing the chaos of everyday life, encouraging you to take control and prioritize what truly matters.
Many Blessings,
Libby
In short: beautiful homage to youth and beauty.
Gina
But for we old crows who tend to be beyond green with jealousy, may we take comfort that someone might see us this way even if our breasts sag, and wrinkles cover the face. **S** I know we sometimes see the less than perfect man thusly.
(((Bhuwan)))
All jesting aside...this is a really great write.
~Jackie~
Love the imagery and expression in this. Missed reading your work!!
Bobbi
of youth is a joy to behold. A Gem!
Simply a stunning beautiful write of youth..
Trixie :)
Nico
Carmen
Love Tinka
Reindeer
You always have the most brilliant write about love and romance and women. This is just wonderful indeed!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
This is so wonderfully romantic; the words flow beautifully as you describe her. Wonderful imagery too. I especially loved the last verse, it leaves me smiling... Well penned, my friend!
Tami
A beautiful poem.
Best wishes
from
kay.
Thankyou .
And her face, like the early morning sun
Adorned with the fabulous smile
Disperses the fragrance of warmth
And revives the spirit of the whole world
Vesna
A man for beauty... So does this mean you are going to trade her in for a new one when she gets old? ;) Sensual feelings. Ahhh, love writing for you all by itself again. Woo hoo! :)
Thanks,
Emilie