RAIN (poem) by Ch'erie de Perrot on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 11, 2013

rain dance
And we will fall asleep
hearing rain and smelling
juniper and sage-pinon
near the mountain
_j janda
Peace and light

FAKHRE

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on May 29, 2009

Very well penned. Enjoyed it.

Anna

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

This is beautiful, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Ch'erie,
So rich in imagery and descriptors, the details strong and true, and a marvellous atmosphere of life surging and springing again. Fine poem.
John

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

And I am so glad to see YOU this morning dearest Fee, missed yah
Be safe and well ok. No more clearing off on holidays, sightseeing, I know, you been tripping around again ;)
Hugzzz Cherrypie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

It is amazing how much weather can affect our hearts, our minds, our bodies and our lifes. Just getting out of hospital today I couldn't believe how cold it was but the weekend is promising warm sunny days and just the thought makes me feel a little better.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Wow, I could hear it as it hit the ground, welcomed relief...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Ch'erie, I'm soaked all over with your splendid imagery,
I hope and pray it keeps raining until you have all you need
and then some!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

this is most certainly a write to bathe in, and the richness of its descriptions tumble like those Rapunzel-tresses you mention. This poem is like an oasis in the desert and it's wonderful to see nature come alive within it. More, please - of both!! :)) xx

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Boy, you all really suffered out there this past year. And your poetic language is so colorful and fresh to these "American" ears that I took a trip halfway around this world. I hope these droughts won't become a permanent feature for you in Australia Keep the rains and your poetry coming...great verses!
Rainy Dreams...michael guy

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Glad to hear someone else is getting rain too...this whole month has been two days of rain to one day of sun, then more rain, but this week for the next 8 days is supposed to be sunny and downright warm and temps on Saturday are looking to be up to mid 80's F or for you around 30c...Rufuz won't like it, but he can stay insode in the A/C for the most part...enjoyed reading of downunder in the rain...Ed & Rufuz [w00f]

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

I love listening to the rain. We have had about two weeks of rain and overcast...the sun is out today and I liked it too. I've found that I enjoy everyday more these days. rain or shine, every day above ground is a good day...

~W~

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Che'rie,

Rain is a wonderful, cleansing part of nature as you relate so well. Being in the desert, its like gold.

Mary

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Thank God for the rain; I just wish we could get it during the hot months of summer, when we NEED it! Great write; well penned, Chezza!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Kaz in Texas. :D

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

You were dancing, and you see, just ask Bear Paw, keep on dancing, all will be beautiful, like your poetry. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Hi HCG, A very welcoming piece! I love a warm rain, to walk in it, and I love to sleep to rain... It not only refreshes mother earth, it refreshes the soul... thank you for sharing this...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Very beautiful writing inded..Hugss

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Chezza,

I'm so glad you're getting the rain you need! May it come as gentle showers, a soaking, blessed rain, not as a flood - in Jesus' Name, Amen. We're supposed to get rain, too, along with the possibility of severe - say a prayer we get the rain and not all the other stuff!!

Beautiful poem of wonderment and gratitude. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

blessed rain--so life giving--a very well writtn piece

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

May it Rain, Rain, Rain for you - and when it does - there's nothing quite like Dancin in the Rain!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Great write Ch'erie. Happy you got the rain finally. God bless.