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Dreaming of the Girl in the Park
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Dreaming of the Girl in the Park

 

Walking with friends across grass in the park

She pulled up her shades and gave me a wink

Red nails red lips and her starry eyes blue

I sat alone with my hat at the picnic table.

 

She came back across the green grass alone

Sat down beside me saying not a single word

Tattoos gracing ankle and wrist, a rose and a fish

Locked her penetrating heavenly eyes on mine.

 

Boldly parting lips and legs, in her hand was mine

I tried to speak making weird ugly sounds

We walked still quiet to her red 63 Corvette

Taking wild flight into the deep dark night.

 

By morning sun rising we were back in our clothes

In the park sitting once more at the picnic table

I looked at the rose and I looked at the fish

She locked eyes and said, “Last night was the best!”

 

2010 © Dayvid Graybill


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 Reviews of "Dreaming of the Girl in the Park"
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
That kind of dream you never want it to end...Great
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 21, 2010
A wild night in a wild car with a wild girl. Died. Went to heaven. Got a hall pass. Patrick

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
and the poem is the best! love tatts in the right places and girls in the park.

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
It feels good from start to finish, to read this. So well written, and brief; yet, a life of love and togetherness hangs in wait. It is lovely that both of you enjoyed yourselves so well. This is really a good feeling writing, Dayvid. Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
Substance of memorable moments and "stuff" not to forget; thanks for sharing, Dayvid. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
Chance encounter carves its initials in the picnic table! 63 Corvette was faster in that year, Dayvid! It caught a fish spread upon blushing rose petals opened wide to say "Hello, come on in"...tats, every pictures tells a story!

Love and litte red corvettes,
Sage

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
What a ride..felt the breeze and all!!!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
sweet

Reviewed on August 16, 2010
I love those good dreams which continue like that! :)

Tattoos & Ink
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Awwww, such a heavenly dream, so pure and delightful...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Gotta love those intimate encounters, going for it as if there was no tomorrow. Nice one Dayvid!!!!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
We can still dream, can't we Dayvid. Mine are not this arousing, but they do sometimes have fish in them.... Nice job.

Thanks Dick

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Wow this was a romantic gem, Dayvid. One of the best romantic poems I have ever read.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY


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