Virginal Wave (Happy New Year) (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Linda Roman

Reviewed on January 4, 2005

Beautiful...........

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Anita,

Absolutely one breathtaking, beautifully created write - wonderful!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Anita!! This is sooooooooooooooooo beautiful!!!! ~sigh~

Jack

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

(((lady a)))

a compelling, hypnotic feast for the senses, this write is GORGEOUS!

may 2005 be your best year EVER! :)

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

Photo, music and verses complement one another to achieve a most pleasing poetic effect. Thank you, Anita. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 31, 2004

You pulled me right into this poem, Anita. This is absolutely beautiful. I was adrift in your verses as your words painted a mural of images in my mind. Poetry just doesn't get any better than this. You are an amazing talent. Happy New Year!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2004

Great poetic images.

Never seen a VIRGINAL, WAVE. must pay more attention..

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on December 31, 2004

Outstanding piece Anita. You are so gifted.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2004

Sigh, I love the way you write... you so effortlessly draw me in, let me float among your words and gentle rhymes... I have always been fascinated with the sea. It is her nature to do as she does, without malice, as she will.

She crashes and she lulls... and you have written that with your seemingly wise and worthy pen. Oh, to peek inside your head... and see your heart. Wonderful piece, Anita. katy xox.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on December 31, 2004

Fantastic poem Anita. I have always seen water as Earth's blood, the oceans her veins. If it were not for the ocean, life would not exist. It, like this poem is very powerful.

I wish you a Happy New Year. ~ Sara

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

exceptional imagery ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

An outstanding write Lady
thanks for sharing

William ....Peace

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Excellent music to go along with a wonderful Nature write about ole Mom Ocean...Seek Peace, Ed & Rufuz & HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Nicely done, Milady...and thanks for the most eloquent one word review I've ever had.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

I find the poem as haunting as the music.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Do Not Humble Yourself Into Sinking Into Shadows Of Your Mind,i.e. Pious!

Credit For Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Sea is the mother....sea is the grave

I believe she truly is, and this is a marvelous poem, and once again we are on a similar wave length with past and present - fascinating.
A marvelous quote and enjoyable music, too, Anita.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Wonderful poetry with an excellent message.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Wonderful poetry Anita!!

Smooth sailing my friend!!

Happy New Year!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Anita. this is splendid poetry!Like all of Creation
the eternal sea demands respect! Happy New Year!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Fantastic write, fantastic message... I'm cast adrift for sure to archive the past and to engage with the future - whilst always living in the now! The tranquility of the picture and music is sublime - are these still your wonderful Irish influences abounding?! I could immerse myself here forever - baptized, rather than sunk!! Especially love the lines: "Endless horizons archive the ages Wave scrolling foam... ink without pages". New beginnings with tomorrow's dawn for each and every day in 2005, Anita. Thanks for being such a bud this year - luvya! Kate xx

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

Beautifully penned, happy new year to you Lady A.