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Optical Operetta
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Plants cry their gratitude for the sun in green joy.  ~Astrid Alauda


 

Optical Operetta

In a garden, by the sea
Upon an ivory cliff
Dawn came as a covering
With sunlight on the lift
 
Languid blooms burst forth in light
As colors blossomed ripe
On the menu of the morn
Was banquet missed by night
 
From the sky, above the sea
To the coral sun
From the earth of blanket seed
Colors wove, as one
 
Brilliance sung her song unique
A hymn without a sound
An operetta, so to speak
From heaven to the ground
 
Pax
A
9/13/07
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Optical Operetta"
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Experiencing this lovely poem is like feeling and hearing the music rain down upon the blissful reader. -fabulous job Anita!
~Butch Howard

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Lovely alliteration in the title.
This poem reminds me of the lightness and beauty
of the Mediterranean.

Cordially,

Axilea

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
What beautiful postitive write with a beautiful positive pic to go with it. Excellent work.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
beauty in this write...music in the words...listened to.
well done...
John

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Very smooth, I like the flow of the words imagery.

Reviewed on September 15, 2007
I've been away from the briar patch for a while. When you leave a familiar location you start to miss certain sounds and visuals. For example, when I return home to Scotland I am always delighted to hear the sound of a moorland peweep, the smell of forestry, and the sight of familiar, reassuring landmarks.
Here I am back at AD and once more in the fairweather realm of linguistic charm.
Operatta? Not so sure that this particular comic associated noun fits the rich pastoral impression depicted.

Cheerie
Dai


Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
This is beautiful Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Beautiful photo and imagery. Anita, you always reset my compass from dismall to possible, if only I'd let go into my dreams. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Your heart for nature is a true one of love and joy. Your writings are always positive and laced with a beautiful lining. This is a pure joy to read.
Love,
Susan....and the photograph is awesome.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Anita,

You sow perfection my friend. That photo and your words compliment each other perfectly. Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Wonderful write. Believe it or not I did not read this, "I sang it."
Keep writing. This is a keeper.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Very cool Title Anita. The imagery in this is almost hypnotic and the words flow effortlessly. Blessings to you ...
Richard

Reviewed on September 14, 2007
BRAVISSIMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful celebration of God's beauty surrounding us. My new favorite of yours, Lady A: Perfection!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Truly a lovely offering and I love the photo as well. Thank you! Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
STUNNING, what great flow, perfection!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
An exquisite poem to match the beauty of your own garden. I remember the pics you shared. How glorious to have such a garden!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on September 14, 2007
What a thing of beauty this poem is A, such wonderful images and flawless rhyme!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
lovely write-and the picture as well

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Sweet my dear friend...sweet.

fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
Beautiful pen...Hugss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 14, 2007
A very wondrous operetta - and poem, Queenie. And, of course, I love the quote!


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