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hatched?
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Chicken eggs usually hatch one at a time. The last chick to hatch always has some catching up to do. And this was certainly the case with Barv Rankin, whose fifteen brothers and sisters all hatched before him.


hatched?


so many ideas started, so many in the nest
incubate by heat of thought, in other words.....ASS-essed
and when these ideas crack thru, when they first see light
they start as fowl, and end up baked, if never given flight



A

 


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 Reviews of "hatched?"
Reviewed on March 3, 2004
Words of wisdom for all to read and take note - it hits the nail on the head - wonderful prose!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
Powerful write!!!

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on February 23, 2004
Clever and very cute...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Cutely worded...cute picture, as well.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Cleverly done, Anita
Amor

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Nice one Anita...food for thought, take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Lady A ... maybe this poem figures the best thing you can do when 'hatched', is start running as fast as your little legs will carry you the moment you are born and don't look back until you are strong enough to face the world. Right or wrong? Bill

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Cleverly delightful. Love and peace to you, Lady A. Regis

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Intelligent and witty...just like you ;) I really enjoyed this.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
I'm SAVING this..incredible wit here..well done Lady A!!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Anita, you are so clever!this is a gem;-)lol!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on February 19, 2004
LOL, Great!!!

Jack

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 19, 2004
Well written Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2004
Very creative!!!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2004
cool notions here Lady A, the ideas needing their fight to become aythng worthy, and a head piled with eggs, ty al

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 18, 2004
very cunning metaphor!

Reviewed on February 18, 2004
Ha ha..I loved this, Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Steve Joos
Reviewed on February 18, 2004
This was witty. All too many ideas end up baked, but even the bst ideas have to be refined before they received general acceptance


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