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Lost at Sea
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...strictly FICTION...thanks all...


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My compass spinning

My head around whirring

Drank too much & toked a bone

What the hell did I do with the key

Could it off the boat have flown…

 

The weather was prime

Though storms were predicted at night

Home by sunset I would have been

If my key had not taken flight…

 

It got darker and on the radio I called

The Coast Guard got the message

But busy they most assuredly were

The first clap of thunder did give me a fright…

 

Unanchored and adrift

I hoped towards the shore I was aiming

I can’t pull start the motor

Will I die tonight…?

© ed J 5/12/08


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 Reviews of "Lost at Sea"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Fiction? Maybe, but there's a whole lot of truth in being desperate and writing about it. It's better to think about it and try to come up with a way to get out of this mess we are in. In this case, how to get to shore without a key when were up a creek without a paddle.

Ron

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Dear lill'brother that's not a boat that's an uncooked pancake that possible can float on you lawn. That was a bad grass (in your lawn)

Ed the Elder

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
I've found myself stranded with my brother several times. Both times the Cost Guard towed us in. You just don't play while boating. It's a dangerous game.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
God, Ed, I hope not. Gene.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Ok Ed we are guessing because you posted this write that you are well and safe so take care. Thank you for sharing some of your scary excitement with us.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
GAD I hope this is fiction - Ed, please be careful, be safe -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Scary situation you got yourself into. We will know by more writes whether you survived in such conditions and bad weather. Will be watching out for you too come back.

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
yer just goin' to have ter scul her home

you do have an oar, doncha?


good write , you are an impressive story teller, my friend

john+

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Durn you, ED! Quit doing things like this...you give us the scares! Best to stay ashore when your "in the mood" :o) Make another key and hide onboard for ememgencies like this...don't want to have to tell you twice...
but still loves ya ~ Micke

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Terrifing write...Did you survive?????????????????????????? Love ya, Bonnie


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