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Facing death...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
Saturday, October 3, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A following sea we have this horrendous night,
The book says to turn round and face the sea with our bow,
She won’t answer the helm & I fear we’ve lost the rudder,
The waves as big as or bigger than I’ve ever seen,
We are in for, to stay alive, a terrible fight…

All sails are torn away,
The sea I’ve served all my life,
Is taking us where she will,
We are at her mercy,
The rain and wind cut us like a knife,
What’s left of the crew & I huddle and pray,
We pray to see at least another day…

A hundred knot wind & the barometer still does fall,
She’s taken about the worst of it & we’ve done our all,
My ship is coming apart at her seams,
To go into the sea this night means certain death…

Waves coming into us as well abeam,
We’ve no choice but to ride them out,
Our younger seamen cannot but scream,
They’ve not faced death as have our older men,
But we are all ready to meet our maker,
I hope He will be kinder to us than has tonight the sea…
© -ed- 10/3/15
 

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 Reviews of "Facing death..."
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 13, 2015

poignant read

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 11, 2015
just hoping for fair seas ahead ...

well conceived and smartly written ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 10, 2015
Thinking about those crew members on that cargo ship El Faro caught up in Joaquain last week. And they had all the modern devices to keep them away from and safe from the storm.

As a seafarer yourself, you have imagined well those of an earlier era with only their knowledge of the sea and their willingness to go out into it to save them from storms that came out of calm and sent them to the bottom of the sea.

You had your sea legs on with this one. Bravo!

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 8, 2015
Quite powerful, Bro.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 5, 2015
You've reset your bar higher with this one. You're in the zone of thoughtfulness, poignancy, and contemplation. Well done, sir Ed.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 5, 2015
the sailor in you has come out finely

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2015
Me thinks you were a sailor in your previous life ED!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 3, 2015
Living close to the sea as you do, you have an affinity with it and its moods no doubt. My ancestors were sailors from France who came to the Grand Banks to fish for cod. Many of them perished in storms. Totally unrelated to this, I invite you to read my comment on George's last poem. I am quite sure it will sense to you as I've read your comment on his. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 3, 2015
I have lived on an Island most of my life, just hoping a big storm passes us bye but once in awhile we get hit. Scary.

Reviewed by Scott Zachary
Reviewed on October 3, 2015
A poem that portrays well what some might be experiencing tonight off the coast. You bring to mind "The Edmund Fitzgerald", which is one of my favorite songs by Gordon Lightfoot.

Thanks, Ed! And get that parrot off your shoulder!

Scott

Reviewed on October 3, 2015
This is a tremendous piece of work, Ed!! Oh, my! How do those men at sea do it????!!!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 3, 2015
I haven't been at sea in hundred-miles-an-hour winds, but I have been out there in hurricanes a few times rescuing people from drilling rigs and oil platforms. It isn't a good place to be, that's for sure.


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