Hello Danae - nice poem with sub-meanings - our burdens in life we carry can be like stones. Our secrets and also be like stone that attempt to bury us from our selfs. Thank you for sharing do continue - great work.
A deafening silence of a tormented soul. As if pain, self inflicted, is her only realisation that she is alive. Yet within the sufferance there is a peace that's come by acceptance.
Like the explosion of perpetual waves, tears become mammoth in this multi-layered allegory of agony and pleasure's hide and seek, allowing momentary identity and passage beside the poet. Passion's lexicon is alive and well in this sensitive write.
A poignant, meaningful, and expressive write that grasps the soul, awakening thoughts and emotions. Thank you for sharing, Danae. Love and best wishes to you,
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Mary
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your writing has moved high on my short list of authors.
Ron
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