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A girl named Krystle, or Tiffany with a “Y”
by Borne Wilder → (All Poetry by Borne Wilder)
Thursday, May 12, 2016    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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A sweaty poem.


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Where the sun is banned and the air is black
Hypnotic music flows
Where sweaty money falls like rain
Pounding tempo grows
Where pulsing lights complete the night
Zannies whet the edge
Where the veil is torn, behind the glass
Stilettos walk the ledge
No price too high per pound of flesh
Silk folds into silk
Men laid to waste by harsh perfume
Drunk on mother’s milk
I watch you bend to beckon me
I ripen in a flash
Yet it’s not I you gesture to
But my sweaty wad of cash

Every time I see you
You’re dancing in the dark
I want to be near you
But we’re worlds apart
Every time I see you
You’re spinning in the sky
I want to be with you
But I can’t fly

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 Reviews of "A girl named Krystle, or Tiffany with a “Y”"
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 17, 2016
Some very atmospheric, well written and descriptive lines here...
It certainly captured the imagination...
Diana...

Reviewed by David Mink (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2016
I see you have been in the same dank, smelly places I have been. Sad that I thought it was fun at the time.

Reminds me of a time I would like to forget. Great job in expressing the feelings most of us had.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 13, 2016
A nice little walk on the seamy side of life. Like Jerry says, lots of little gems in this knowing slice of life amid the beat of the night.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 13, 2016
Oh boy! Loved this bit of insider thoughts and feelings in this walk among the past. So many fantastic lines within this little short poem, I guess this one is my favorite . . .

"Where sweaty money falls like rain" Yep, indeed it does that.


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