Truly written with passion and love. Love is a passionate thing of the heart and the sea, what can I say? Is another wonderful passion to have and I know speaking for our family, we all love the sea and the loves in our lives.
Oooooh this is a true favorite!
I love this and the flowwww of the waves as I read each tantalizing line and chosen word!
How you inspire my hearts desires Sweet Fee!
Thank you for this exquisite poem!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
If only...
YOu can in dreams and hope is only over the shining horizon!
"Sigh!" Sooo lovley, Felix! I echo Sheri UY'S COMMENTS....BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL! How I've missed the pleasure of reading you. Always a joy, and I shall keep this one is my treasure's chest!
If Only...auh Fee. Your maritime romantic heart is what great epics of the sea is all about . You are a true man of the seas tuned to the song of the sirene.
Ahhhh yes the sweet smell of salt air in the lungs, revitalising the senses, awakening the mind to the mysteries of the DEEP within our hearts.. Give me a 40 ft Ketch and I'm outa here, weigh anchor and leave the hum drum hustle bustle boooooring land lubbers life style for a good few months at a time.
Must be in the blood, as GGGRandpappy was a Rear Admiral LOL, and he didn't like being ordered back to dry land by his overweight miserable dommineering brother just because.......Never mind!! LOL
So they sailed away for a year and a day, to the land where the Bong tree Grows, and there in the woods a piggy wig stood with a ring in the end of his nose.... U know the rest Fee teehee.
Hugzzzzz
Cherrypie
Be my reckonin, that they may have taken some Pie as well as honey and money wrapped up in a five pound note...
Oh Fee, this is so passionately sweet and steady..If only, you can get your wish to be fulfilled..Happy New Year, my sweet friend.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber V
Fee, I love to see change of style but unless the words convey the thought, it is lost. Your passions shine through. Beautiful expressions of love and of the sea.
Like Rose, I couldn't find a favorite line. This flows so well. For a desert gal with only memories of her love of the sea, you took me there. A great place to be first thing in the morning.
If only I could tell you how wonderful you are. [Started to say "this is," but it all goes together, doesn't it.] You are a wonder, Fee! Poem's beyond great!! 'Pea' <3
Oh my gosh this is Beautiful,,,Passionate,,, Stunning,, My favorite!
I lived on a sail boat on Marco Island back in 1982 , It really was a heartfelt expierence,, you took me back,,,,,, :)
Christine
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Love you cuz,
Selena
I love this and the flowwww of the waves as I read each tantalizing line and chosen word!
How you inspire my hearts desires Sweet Fee!
Thank you for this exquisite poem!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
If only...
YOu can in dreams and hope is only over the shining horizon!
Hugs (lots of it!),
Sheri
A fantastic use of imagery to pen this heartfelt piece. Love it:) Sheila
Love,
Susan
Must be in the blood, as GGGRandpappy was a Rear Admiral LOL, and he didn't like being ordered back to dry land by his overweight miserable dommineering brother just because.......Never mind!! LOL
So they sailed away for a year and a day, to the land where the Bong tree Grows, and there in the woods a piggy wig stood with a ring in the end of his nose.... U know the rest Fee teehee.
Hugzzzzz
Cherrypie
Be my reckonin, that they may have taken some Pie as well as honey and money wrapped up in a five pound note...
and your poem words that flow easily
caressing with the motion and notion
enjoyed!!!
Carole~
Love Tinka
Peace, love, and light,
Amber V
Walt
Like Rose, I couldn't find a favorite line. This flows so well. For a desert gal with only memories of her love of the sea, you took me there. A great place to be first thing in the morning.
Thanks
Sweets
--RaeLynn
Beautifully breathtakingly penned longing, powerfully penned...yes. Well done!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love,
Chanti Lace
I lived on a sail boat on Marco Island back in 1982 , It really was a heartfelt expierence,, you took me back,,,,,, :)
Christine
I love it, Fee!
Becca~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Hope you had a great Christmas; I sure did! :)
Love ya Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
The metaphors are outstanding. This is quite a masterpiece my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.