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Justice of the Colt 45
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Justice of the Colt 45

By: Fee

 

It was when the music stopped and the curtain dropped

While the lights dimmed the message last call

While the old wino’s dosed and the red harlots posed

At the hour all those imagined pretences fall

 

He zipped up his jacket, gulped the last of his beer

And slightly unsteady he rose to his feet

Pulled his hat over his hair, pushed back his chair

Then turned slowly recognizing defeat

 

For on the stage that night, he saw a tantalizing sight

The red head lady named Vic he once held dear

In the light she danced round the pole, losing her soul

To the cheap dollars tucked in front and rear

 

The fire grew in his eyes, a smile couldn’t disguise

And he felt the cold steel in his hand as he aimed

A smoking Colt 45, made her more dead than alive

And with the second shot his love anger was tamed…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Justice of the Colt 45"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 8, 2008
Man, oh man! so you was the one there? my hear kept ringing for days as you stead yor hand on my shoulder, I thought I was a goner...and it wasn't beer all over my boots you know?

Georg

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Bang Bang!!
:) Cherrypie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
An excellent show of strong imagery and imagination, Fee!
Sheila

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Truly an intense, awesome write! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
A compelling story. You are an excellent story teller.

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Louie Lamour watch out! Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Excellent western tale. R

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
I love it! Unfolds like a movie!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Bitingly sad for anyone to succomb to such a horrific end. Jealously will get you nowhere, nice writting...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Fee,, You would be such an awesome story teller around a camp fire!
:)Christine

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Wao! Very intense scene...There's never a reason for that though, I applaud you for this riveting write!!!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
A very poignant piece, Fee.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Wow Fee Love can you sure make a man mean. You look her life when maybe if you asked she could have been your wife. Loved it, a great story Cuz.

Love ya face cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Now Fee. lol. You blew her away! I may require your services with that colt some time. Okay. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Goodness I Love Tuck A Buck ;)
Seriously...wow this is an emotional piece
and yes a taunted man (or woman) can lead to a last resorted extreme
I personally know a similar situation revolved around jelousy & possesiveness gone exteme, but it was with a 357 Magnum. Oh goodness what a mess that was.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Superb writing, Fee; drew me in and did not let go til the end! Fantabulous; wow!!

(((HGUS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Drama unfolds in this dynamic poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Quite a sad story, Mr. Fee, and I think one that has played out in real life, at least a time or two, through the years.

Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Very dramatic Fee the flow is just perfect and the story compelling.


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