I will hear your voice in raging seas
When all around the tempest roars
I’ll know you are there with me
As I sail to far distant shores
When Neptune sets loose the monster
To toss my ship near on the rocky reef
Where sea serpents make their home
And the mermaids cry out in grief
I taste your last kiss on my briny lips
As my life line rope I tie to the mast
I close my eyes and give myself to God
so my thoughts of you may be my last
But then the lighthouse glows it’s bearing
Guiding us to safe harbor in the night
Just like your love always brings me home
Your loving heart my guiding light…
I love, love, love this! Such imagery roars out!
A dying love not forgotten and much much more, is felt!
I truly love this!
YOur passions run amok!
Psss...My eyes drifted down for a sec, and I believe I read something that showed PURE JEALOUSY! This poem touches the HEART and SOUL of a Love NEVER To be forgotten! BE INSPIIRD by the Poetic Pen, no matter what blows in!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Love, Hugs, Peace and Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExoo
That picture is AWESOME! I'm inspired by it...
A great write. I feel the love for the sea, the sadness of being away from loved-ones, the fear, the acceptance of fate, the hope, and the joy. And your message includes respect for those who go through this. Well done:)
Sheila
The only thing banal and used up is you, Ivars.
Basically, you suck. You're not a nice person. I guess that's what Latvia does to you. You have no right to write such wretched things. You don't even have anything here for the rest of us to wrench blood and bone from.
Coward. Most bullies are.
Your poem is very romantic and any lady will love to hear it - such beautiful imagery and tender love expressed! We almost felt the strong waves and the tossing seas...and the coming home to one's love! Enjoyed!
Cynthia
Guiding us to safe harbor in the night
Just like your love always brings me home
Your loving heart my guiding light"
What a way to bring in all into focus. Brilliant
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Felix
Love Tinka
Myrna
Linda
Hugs,
Christine
Poem wrote by a real sailor that honors the sailor of all times.
Certainly a keeper!
Georg
Hugzz Cherrypie :)
lovely,
Ted
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D
Just as you'd surrendered your last thoughts to your love, the lighthouse beaconed with the love in your heart guiding you to safe shores!!
Thank you for sharing your Lovelight heart with us!!
Love and Gratitude, Suzie :-D
over the side I went in a gale of force 5,
I gotta be honest, I did at that moment die,
So I am writing this posthumously
after my ship too did into the sea do a deep dive...ed
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
Be always safe,
Karen